Saturday, July 28, 2018

Choice and Consequence of Redemption: Fresh Blood Final - Righteous Anger + Link to download the full story




Chapter 4 – Righteous Anger
His added panic and anger has changed his alternate appearance. His wings are now four sharped tendrils and the red center of his chest is missing. His skin is white from fear and his eyes red with blood red tears flow from his face. The power within him is overflowing and allows him to teleport to the various hideouts. His powers affect everyone he comes across, which puts their minds in a powerful haze. He massacres any Doll Factory guards he finds while scaring the slaves and any Purple Butterflies that happen to be there.
Nick goes through a few hideouts until his monsters start fighting against him. He can longer teleport, and he has to run to his next location. The city unleashes its monsters from every crack to attack Nick, but his power is greater. He eviscerates the smaller one is one punch and tears through the larger ones who are as big as buses. No matter how many different types of horrifying monsters are thrown at Nick, he tears them all in a bloody mess to get to the only thing he cares about in the world. The energy coming from Nick affects the people around him and they start seeing what he’s seeing in one big mass vision. The monsters don’t attack them, but they do feel the blood Nick spills around the city, even though it does disappear from them once they get far enough away.
Eventually, Nick makes it to the next hideout on the far end of the city. He eliminates the guards without any effort and frees the slaves. In one room, he finds Allison’s dead body. His rage subsides and gives way to sadness. Her throat is cut, her legs and arms are cut off, and her eyes are gone. He sits on her bed and holds her dead, bloody, and dirty body.
“I…I’m so sorry Allison,” he says with tears flowing from his eyes, “I’m sorry I couldn’t be the man you wanted me to be. You were always a better hero than I could ever be.”
In a daze of grief and tears, Nick doesn’t know what to do. He sings old songs they used to dance to together. Nick tells her of the good times they had together. He talks to her corpse as if it’ll bring her back. As if his tears will bring her soul back. After what feels like hours, Nick lifts his head and sees a clipboard with notes on it. He picks it up and reads what they wrote about Allison. They say she was a high-value target here in Hillside City. The Doll Factory was spying on them and the person Nick found in the forest was one of the spies. They planned on kidnapping both of them but were afraid to confront Nick after what he did, but once he left his house, they quickly moved in and settled for just Allison. It turns out that she fought against her captors to a stalemate. Since they had respect for her, they gave her a knife and gave her the choice to either; submit willingly to them or to kill herself to which Allison obviously chose to kill herself. They then chose to mutilate her body, so they can pack it and fix it in a way that they can use it later as another one of their dolls. Some of them actually tried testing her out before they heard they were under attack.
This temporarily replaces the sadness Nick feels with unending rage. His body transforms yet again to its final rage form.
His tendrils are now four fiery arms. The hole in his chest is now on fire along with his eyes, legs, and his soul. His hands are permanently made into fists with charred chains. Again, he gains an inordinate amount of power that allows him to teleport. He goes from criminal hideouts to abusive households to kill and let out his anger. The entire city is affected as his grief and rage infects everyone. Some people start fights and become impatient while others struggle to contain their feelings.
Nick kills over thirty people before reaching the final Doll Factory hideout on the other side of the city. In it, he rips apart everyone he can see besides the slaves who he sets free. The slaves flee in terror as Nick repeated tears apart the bodies of the Doll Factory guards. A young boy then walks out of a hidden room. Nick stops his slaughter as the boy looks among the bodies with tears in his eyes. A pair of bodies, a man and a woman, catch his attention. He runs to them, puts his hands on them, and cries. It appears that the two people he’s crying over are his parents. The boy gets up in a fit of rage and attacks Nick who defends himself.
“Stop it kid!” he says, “Your parents were human trash. You’re better off now than before!”
The boy doesn’t listen, which gets on Nick’s nerves.
“Stop it!”
Nick punches the body in the chest and makes him fall down in pain.
“Stay down! Don’t make me kill you! I’m telling you you’re going to have a better life without them!”
The boy tries to get up and Nick tries punching him in the chest again but ends up hitting the boy since he gets up. The boy’s neck is now completely broken and dies shortly after. Nick’s heart feels like it has completely stopped for the second time tonight as he has taken the life of an innocent. He yells out in pain and anger directed at himself as his monsters come out of his mouth and his power is taken away.
“Now do you see? You can’t handle this power,” the other him says.
“Ok…Ok. I give up. I give up the power I took. I give up killing.”
“That’s all we wanted to hear.”
His monsters start to fade from his vision.
“What? You aren’t going to haunt me or anything?”
“Your wife’s death will do that for us.”
His monsters then completely fade away and Nick can no longer see them or take their power. He sobs in the dark for a bit before hearing the disembodied voice of his wife in his head.
“Nick, you’re a hero to people. You’re my hero.”
He remembers what she said when he asked her about his charity events and speeches he made to inspire people.
“I love you and I always will,” the memory of her voice rings again.
“Yeah,” Nick says to himself, “That’s what I’ll do.”
Nick destroys his mask and leaves it behind. From the hideout, he walks back to the city. Not only does the pain of losing Allison and his guilt set in, but the pain he’s sustained kicks in as well. He’s been shot, stabbed, and hit multiple times. He tries to keep moving on but he eventually succumbs to the pain and collapses. After a few seconds of laying in his own blood, he opens his eyes to see Allison. An invisible barrier separates the two. Nick is on the side where souls are being purified in fire while Allison is on the side where everything good is.
Allison places her hand on the barrier and says, “Do you mean it? Are you going to redeem yourself?”
Nick puts his hand where hers is then says, “I-I will. I promise you that.”
“I didn’t seriously ask that. It was rhetorical. I know what you did, but I also know the way you act.”
“Allison…”
“Heh, don’t worry. I’ll see you again. Don’t be afraid to make yourself happy and find someone else.”
“No, wait…”
“I love you, Nick.”
“I love you! Don’t-”
Nick wakes up in a hospital bed and jolts up. He sees all of his cuts, bruises, and injuries patched up though he can still feel the stinging pain of them.
A doctor enters his room and says, “I thought you’d wake up soon. Thank God.”
The doctor is a woman who is a bit older than Nick. She has green eyes and black hair with one or two strands of gray hair. There’s something about her that Nick can’t help but find attractive.
She catches his gaze, blushes then continues saying, “We guess you got caught up in that big city-wide panic. No one can really figure out what caused it though that’s not to say it hasn’t happened before.”
“Did…did you save my life?”
“I am a doctor and it is my job, so…yes, yes I did.”
Nick laughs a bit, but it pains him to.
“What’s your name?”
“It’s Morgan.”
“Morgan, I’ll make this up to you. I swear.”
“That’s sweet of you to say, but you don’t have to. Besides, aren’t you married?”
“My wife died last night. A friend told me the Doll Factory took her and she killed herself instead of letting herself be subjected to them.”
“That’s horrible! I’m so sorry.”
“You don’t have to be. Let me do something for you instead. I’m going to be doing more for people from now on.”
“That’s great, but-”
“No more buts. Let me help.”
From then on, Nick dedicates his time to helping others. He gives more to charities and spends his time helping others. He starts his own boxing school in Hillside City where he teaches people of all ages how to defend themselves. The painful memories of his wife’s death and the innocent life he took come back every now and then, but he fights through the regret so that can redeem himself. He talks to people in conferences and at his school about the lessons he’s learned and tries to inspire people to be better. Nick dedicates his life as he does this day in and day out without rest. He becomes a better man and an inspirational figure to most people he meets and to those who hear him speak. His redemption is just a practice of his that he does every day, but it’s the genuine effort and dedication that he puts into it that makes it count.
About a year later as he walks the streets of the city, he hears something in a nearby alleyway. He goes to the end of it to find Morgan with cut up clothes. She’s sobbing and holding herself over her recent loss.
Nick walks up to her with a welcoming smile on his face and says, “Do you need help, beautiful?”

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