Thursday, August 31, 2017

New Carnage series review


Not many people talk about this short series so I might as well. This new Carnage series is about Cletus/Carnage going after one girl he missed when he was on a killing rampage which leads him to a book that makes his symbiote stronger. I didn't expect to read this cthulhu-Lovecraft mythos type story and was looking more for a story where Carnage goes around killing and causing mayhem while a good guy or someone more evil than him tries to take him out. We get this a bit in the first issue, but it goes away by the second. I still like this story even though the 2nd volume is a bit weak. Carnage is a fun character to read about especially in this story where you read how he thinks and you get to see his abusive family in his past which made him into the killer he is. Eddie Brock as Anti-Venom is cool and is religious for some reason and at the end of the series, it sort of hints at the Venom series that's going on now. There's also a couple female characters that aren't as interesting even though one black girl whose name I forgot is infected with Carnage's symbiote and later becomes an angel symbiote (no bullshit). Spoiler: I didn't say cthulhu for no reason as the main symbiote final boss is named Cthon (I think this is how it's spelled) and looks like Cthulhu. As you can see, they even have tentacles on the 3rd volume of Carnage and there's a review on the top of it that says Lovecraft fans will love this story.
All in all, get this series if you like stories with Carnage in it or have a Lovecraft inspired feel to it. There are a couple bumps in the series, but it's still fun to read none the less. I'd give it a 4/5 if you need a rating.

Tips on collecting comics and video games

If you've seen pictures of my collections of comics and video games, you know that I have a lot of them. If you haven't, here are a few pictures.


Quite a lot right? Now you must be wondering how did I get so many. Well the obvious answer is that I used money, but how did I get so much with my part time job and my self-publishing career? I'll be giving you a few tips as to how to get your collection of books, video games, movies, whatever to somewhere on this level.

  • (for writers) Make something that people really want. I made a book Trapped Body and Soul in a Video Game that critiqued and improved on the widely hated, but popular Sword Art Online series. This book sold about 200 copies and has a few 5 star reviews. I also talked to a few YouTubers who also critiqued SAO which lead to fans of theirs buying my book. The result is that I got the Berserk series (38 volumes) and I paid for several book giveaways. This is also thanks to birthday money, but that's besides the point. Talk to people who are interested in a book that is not made yet and the rest will follow.
  • (for college aged part time workers) I work as a stock boy at Macy's and I don't make too much since I only go in when there's a truck or things that need to be done there. Also school doesn't help in this as it takes up time. Try to save up while sacrificing certain titles and buying others. While I'm talking to college aged people or just people in college, actually study for a degree that will get you a good paying job (accountant, computers, preferably a job in business).
  • Wait for coupons and deals (buy 2 get 1 free, 20% off).
  • Don't buy titles that you know are bad unless they're cheap and you want to challenge yourself.
  • eBay is your best friend as I've had the best deals there. Amazon's marketplace of other sellers is good as well though I've had comics ship and arrive faster from there.
  • On eBay, if there's a lot of people watching the item and this item is at a good price then there's a good possibility one person will buy it sooner than you think. In my experience, it's a good idea to spend a bit more to get good deals on items now than later as someone will buy it when you're least expecting it. This kind of also applies to Amazon, but it doesn't happen as often there.
  • Buy from series that you know are complete and maybe wait for a different series to end until you buy another issue. This is for people who buy from multiple series.
  • Don't try to collect everything from every series. Maybe buy one volume from every series, but that's it. Dedicate yourself to only a select number of series that you can count on one and a half hands unless you can find great deals or have a lot of money.
This is a good number of tips that you should keep in mind and I'd like to hear any other tips or advice that you have when it comes to collecting comics, video games, or whatever.

Wednesday, August 30, 2017

Popularity and Views of my Posts

It looks like more people check out my posts when I talk politics, special stuff about my books, religion, or personal stuff so let's see what kind of damage I can do with as I list out things I know.

  • Atheism is a child's religion as it makes the person their own god.
  • Being gay is a social condition given by others where it'd be the advice of other people, bad/abusive pasts, sexual assault, or similar things.
  • I attempted suicide about 7 or so times.
  • The Choice and Consequence series main characters are based off parts of my personality.
  • The Society's Monsters trilogy is based off dreams I had that all connect together. The third one has some daydreams/half asleep dreams.
  • Leftism/socialism is for those who don't know how government and people work because leftists think people will bend to their will because they think they're right.
  • I've seen every kind of porn including the deep web stuff (I didn't go on there I just saw pictures of it).
  • I hate looking at myself in the mirror.
  • Skillet is the best band ever.
  • I'm probably wasting my time in college since there's no real job I want. I just want a job that pays well. The only reason I'm there is because my parents made it seem like it was the only option.
  • I swear I've heard God's voice before. It has the force of thunder but sounds gentle and caring at the same time.
  • I've also heard the devil's voice. It sounds understanding and kind but it's deceiving and corrupt.
  • I stopped listening to Rise Against because they're good when they talk about general life stuff but they're politically stupid.
Pretty interesting stuff I guess. Thank you for reading through this all and I hope you learned something interesting about me. Sorry if it seems a bit selfish and attention seeking.

One of my English classes and an early start to SJW culture

This is a short story about one of the things I was looking at in class. It was a short movie about a black crossing dressing fashion show and how they spread throughout the country. The movie was set in the mid 80s I think until the early 90s and also had a small interview with Prince who knew about this small group of people. These gay men, for lack of a better word since that's what they are, want fame and fortune just like the female models they idolize. The problem is that they're aiming for  a crowd of people that consist of straight men and women who want to be like the models so they unfortunately won't attract that audience, but they try anyways and only get people who think like them so at least they have a small audience. People in the class argued that these crossdressers should get mainstream attention and I brought up the fact I just said. They then looked at me like I was some asshole for telling the unfortunate truth.
The SJW part of it was the black men blaming "white" American culture for not giving them fame like their models such as Marilyn Monroe and that people should just accept them without asking questions. It's funny how they said that while only having one white crossdresser they focus on who is revealed to have been killed because he tricked men to take him out on expensive dates. They also seemed to want to force their way of thinking on other people and  hated others who disagreed with them. These people also had a rough childhood from what I remember which adds to my theory that being gay is a social condition that is learned and not natural. I say that this is an early start to SJW culture because this is a group of people who act in a similar way to SJWs who want to enforce their way of living and thinking because they feel it's the right way. The culture itself seems to have emerged from old race relations in the past from people who can't let go of it.
I took this class last semester and I can definitely say that it was full of SJW type kids and yes I'm saying kids because the SJW mindset is incredibly child-like and so is the entire liberal/left mindset while I'm talking about it. Short answer why: because they want to put too many restrictions on people (block free speech, forced diversity, lack of religious freedom) and too much freedom at the same time (letting in illegals, making college "free", "good" healthcare). My loud mouth about my views was probably also the reason I failed the class, which was weird because I was getting Ds on papers (for some reason) and I came out with an F.
In conclusion, I hope you find this a bit interesting. Thanks for listening!

Tuesday, August 29, 2017

Starting a new school semester (Quick update)

Hello everyone,

I'm starting my hopefully last year of college and that'll slow down my writings a bit until December 20th. Now the good thing is, is that I have off Monday, Wednesday, and Thursday and my next Choice and Consequence stories are short so you won't have to wait too long for them. That's all I really wanted you to know since I feel like school is going to slow me down a bit. Thank you for understanding.

Monday, August 28, 2017

Books to be released

Going to be written and released:
1. Choice and Consequence of Following Orders + A Single Choice, Deadly Consequences (This story is really short so they're going together)
2. Choice and Consequence: The Original Nightmares (called this because the first 5 were made as video games)
The Man Behind the Messages (free October release)

Not sure yet which gets released/written next after the three above:
Best Intentions, Worst Results (Bloodborne inspired book)
Lost and Confused (Choice and Consequence spin-off)
Banished Tales & Legends (Cursed Tales sequel)
Short Tales of Horror (Physical release of Banished Tales plus Cursed Tales)
Choice and Consequence of Being a Dumbass (Self-critique of my work that also uses the critiques other people have given me)
Twisted, Demented, and Ready to Kill (Twisted Metal inspired short stories like Cursed Tales)
Choice and Consequence of Losing Yourself (A woman who was forced to be a prostitute finally gets the opportunity to find out who she was before with the help of the gang boss)

Really not sure yet:
Redo: Choice and Consequence of Saving Lives (Face Lifted), Choice and Consequence of Redemption (Another Path)
Trapped Body and Soul in a Video Game Sequel (Inspired by the Sword Art Online Gun Gale Arc)

I'm surprised I managed to fit it one more book so that I published 21 books since my 1st book, but I guess that's to be expected since I mostly write short stories. I bet by next year I'l have over 40 books released especially since I'm redoing the 5th and 6th C&C and a collection of the Choice and Consequence stories.

Sunday, August 27, 2017

Eyes - Blood, Honor, and Time Lore

After the one of the ends, humanity received an evolution that can show their personalities in their eyes. This can show itself to a normal person once they get to know them for a while or if a person is perceptive enough or a good people person. There are various types of eyes that people can have.
Glimmering – people with these eyes usually see the good in everything around them and seemingly cannot be brought down by evil or unfortunate events. They are said to have the Eyes of God.
Darkened – these eyes are black and void like the person who has them. They are said to have the Eyes of Endless Potential or the Eyes of Humanity.
Burning – people with these eyes never give up, never stop, and never get brought down without a difficult fight. They are said to have the Eyes of the Solis.
Flower – people with something that looks like a flower in their eyes are said to usually be highly compassionate, forgiving, and charitable. They are said to have the Eyes of the Archangel of Charity.
Soft – people with these eyes are usually female and are great at being mothers, self-sacrifice, and good at comforting others. They are said to have the Eyes of Terra.
Blades – these eyes look like they have sharp thorns around the iris. People with these eyes are usually aggressive, protective, and favor traditional values. They are said to have the Eyes of the Wise Angel who watches over Heaven’s Library.
River – patterns in these eyes look like the flow of water. People with these eyes are usually calm in the face of danger, slow to judgement, and very scholarly. They are said to have the Eyes of Decretum or the Archangel who judges souls with God.
            Though all of these eyes should only produce good, humanity has corrupted them by their own doing, however, they never start out as evil. Only the person who possess them decide what person they will become.

Saturday, August 26, 2017

Reviewing Marvel feminist/SJW comics


Since I can handle Sword Art Online, I tried to read these Marvel comics that have a feminist/SJW touch to them. I've found all of these comics for cheap on eBay and here's a short review on all of them.

Squirrel girl - 3.5/5
The first issue was promising, but it seems to get worse as the comic goes on, it starts to become an SJW comic. Now it doesn't really push an SJW agenda, but it does mention things they like a couple times. The art of the comic seems to oddly decrease in quality as the comic goes on and only gets better when they show the old comic issues that have Squirrel girl in them, which are also better on the story front. Some of the jokes and the comedy of the comic does get a bit stale and I think if they drop the SJWness of this comic and focus more on the comedy (and less on the short gags on the bottom of each page) then this could be a decent comic series to pick up every now and then.

Mockingbird - 2.5/5
This whole comic is covered in "Girl Power" and "I totally know the sciences". It's a shame it is since this character could've been a cool secret agent character in the world of heroes kind of like Black Widow. Speaking of that, there's this one part of the comic that tries to say that female heroes aren't as popular or they don't get as much attention. I could name a few female comic characters that everyone knows; Harley Quinn, Poison Ivy, Wonder Woman, Catwoman, Batgirl. You want more mainstream female characters that everyone likes? Make them and make them original so they stand by themselves. So the comic is wrong and knows it's wrong and admits it on the very next page.

Spider-Gwen - 3/5
A decent comic that doesn't really have too many feminism or SJW themes in it. It's just an average story with some interesting what-ifs like if Daredevil worked for Kingpin and the Punisher as a cop. For some reason, Gwen doesn't look cute like she's supposed to and kind of looks ugly. This goes for the rest of the comic's design, but it may not bother other people. The thing that really bothered me was a black woman Captain America, which was really out of place. Yeah I know it's an alternate reality with different main characters, but this seemed way too obvious of an agenda pushing decision.

(Muslim) Ms. Marvel - 3/5
The story wasn't too bad in this comic, but it wasn't too much to write home about. I like how it shows Kamala starting out small instead of getting the bigger challenges like how the other SJW characters do. It doesn't really push any kind of Muslim message in these issues at least so that's fine. I do, however, wish she could've used her shape shifting ability more.

Thor (female) - 2.5/5
Like Mockingbird, but with more dumb male characters. Nothing really interesting.

Spider-man (Miles Morales) Vol. 1 (not pictured) - 3/5
Just an average comic really. Miles Morales isn't anything special in my opinion. It's probably why there isn't anything added to his name and why even in universe they call him the black Spider-man. You'd think Bendis (the writer) would give this character his own villains to make him stand out more and not focus so much on putting him on Amazing Spider-Man's level.

Silk - 4(ish)/5
Surprising right? The reason for this is because Silk is a hero character playing as an "evil" assistant to Black Cat while also being a Shield agent who also needs to look after her only family, her brother who coincidentally is named Albert. I like the dynamic presented here and how the character is pushed to do things meant for expert heroes. She's forced to grow up fast or lose everything essentially. The art is the biggest thing holding this comic back, which doesn't make the character look cute like she's supposed to be (what's with these artists who do this?). The only SJW thing that this character does is say sexist to something that isn't really that sexist (she keeps getting called my darling by one villain) and I guess the fact that she always seems to win, but that just seems like the character showing how she can think on her feet. I'll read the next issue and the zero issue when I get the chance to see if this series gets better.

Extra. The only All New character that I like that isn't Gwenpool (check out Diversity & Comics video about her) is the new Ghost Rider, Robbie Reyes. He lives in a harsh neighborhood and only wants to make his little brother happy whom he has to raise by himself. Because he lives in such a place, he gets killed then resurrected by a spirit that lives inside his car. I love the gritty nature of the comic and how Robbie always try to do better. I will definitely pick up the other two issues that involve this character.

Note: It's weird how both Sword Art Online and some of these feminist comics are sexist towards their female characters. Also SAO is worse than these comics obviously, but that doesn't say that much.

New eBook sale! Get'em for free!

Man made gods is out as a free eBook on Smashwords so pick it up if you want the entire short story collection!

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I've also put all of my eBooks there for free until the start of October so use the code you see there to get them for free. These are the codes;

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Friday, August 25, 2017

The End - Blood, Honor, and Time Lore Story

The battlefields were littered with the bodies of humans, demons, and monsters alike. The hero of this time who had the blessing of time alteration was gathering survivors and looking for help.
            He isolated himself and asked God, “I’ve changed all I can and still humanity barely managed to survive. Is there anything else I can do?”
            “There is no need to change anything for I tell you this is the best ending,” God responded, “This generation of humanity is the first strong one and will begin an age of knowledge and truth. The first time humanity ended was when it committed the first sin and humanity had the capability to be like me. I tell you to put your faith into these people like you have mine and humanity will flourish more than it has before.”
            The hero did this and humanity became stronger than it had ever been before. People were wiser, stronger, and more knowledgeable like God than ever before. The names of these groups of people fade and mix into the ones they do currently and are lost to all libraries except for the library in Heaven that records all. The next time the world ends will test humanity again and will evolve it again as it does now until forever. The only thing that is not known, however, is how much of humanity will be lost during this end and how much suffering and bloodshed will happen.

Thursday, August 24, 2017

The first memory I have

You're going to have to bear with me with this one as I recount the first memory I can remember. This was when I was two years old and I think this was a dream.
I was looking at some sort of selection screen where I start new game plus I think on hard difficulty, which is above another difficulty. After that, I am born (I get pulled out of a "dark tunnel" and into the light) then baptised full immersion style with the priest holding me in the water and my mom and dad beside them (I later learn that this was not how I was baptised). I then see a heavenly figure which appeared to be God Himself. He said in a thunderous voice that had a caring tone to it, "You will accomplish great things". Soon after that, I wake up in my crib/bed and walk out my room into the hallway.
It's a pretty weird memory to have as your first right? A dream. It's interesting or at least to me it is.
If you have any ideas about this memory, then please let me know and thanks for listening.

Deo Infinito - Blood, Honor, and Time Lore Story

The uncreated God of the universe. He existed at the beginning of time and created everything that exists within a matter of days. Good, animals, the elements, nature, humanity, and various other things as well. Though He tries to be peaceful in all His dealings, there are occasions when force is necessary when His mercy and restraint reach their limit. His angels and archangels follow His will without question though one archangel or rather a close friend did disobey Him and take a third of the angels with him. Nevertheless, He tries to make His greatest creation, humanity, follow His ways to spread good in the world. Humanity was made in His image, their souls made out of the same elements as His, their minds able to comprehend His ways, but humans lack same the power He possesses.
To show His devotion to humanity, He became fully human while still being fully God and walked among them in their time of need. The generation at the time disagreed with His ways and brutally killed Him, but in three days, he rose from the dead in front of everyone and made believers out of all men. Though some still doubt His existence and question His ways, He will still love and try to save them until death for you can only try to save someone for so long until it becomes a useless effort.  Every now and then, He'll come down from Heaven in the form of a poor human being and test certain humans by asking for help since the one helps the least of humanity helps Him and is rewarded greatly in Heaven. He will do this until the end and forever for truth can never truly die or be rewritten.

Almeda Vanitas - The First Hero - Blood, Honor, and Time Lore story

*I don't think I posted the lore stories as normal posts so you probably didn't see them. I'll be posting them daily along with something new so you can see and enjoy them.

Almeda was always an adventurous and virtuous girl. She tried to do good for others, sacrifice her belongings if needed, and do acts without asking for a reward. This got the attention of God and He ordered Tunc Messorem to give her the honor of being the first one to receive the time alteration blessing. With it, she changed various events in the past in moderation though this was easier said than done as she was just a simple sword and shield fighter with a backup bow and arrow. Almeda was not used to the kinds of combat the past presented her with, with demon knights, dragons, trolls, and various other intimidating warriors and creatures. Due to this, she died many deaths and messed up many times while trying to change the past. One bad end in particular, had her stuck as breeder for a year until Tunc Messorem had to intervene to save her. This broke her down and almost made her give up her time alteration blessing.
            “I’m not as strong as the hero you want me to be,” she said, “I can’t do it!”
            Tunc Messorem tells her of the time when he was as weak as she was and said, “No one starts life strong. You have to make yourself strong through mistakes and training. Everyone who is strong was once pitifully weak, but their determination and effort to become strong is what made them strong in the end. You can be better than the weak person I was before. I know you can.”
            This gave Almeda strength to keep trying and though she kept failing, she never stopped trying and eventually changed the events she wanted changed. Her actions made her into the world’s first human hero, but she gave that credit to Tunc Messorem and put his story into humanity’s history books. Though people debate whether or not Tunc Messorem was morally good or not, Almeda regards him as the real first hero. He didn’t want to take this honor from her, but deep inside he felt comfort and love, a feeling that was dead for a long time for him. Eventually she pasted away naturally and her time alternation blessing was taken away. Tunc Messorem promised himself that he’ll treat other people he gives the blessing to the same as she did for him in honor of Almeda and to become that person she looked up to.

Wednesday, August 23, 2017

Dead Men Walking - Blood, Honor, and Time Lore

There was a small group of the Cursed that tried to completely meld with the armored skin of the dragons. This was to evolve man to the next level so they could be stronger and more adept at survival. They even thought if they could successfully do it then they be able to obtain the abilities of the dragons like breathing fire or to send spikes out of their body.  When they attempted it, their bodies did meld with the skin though they also meld with the mind of the dragons. Seeing an opportunity, Luciferum took the minds of these people under his control and gave them special orders. These people would abduct wandering individuals who are alone at night and drag them into the Earth to turn them into creatures such as themselves. These kidnappings usually occur around places far from civilization or highly dangerous areas like poisonous forest, molten wastes, or predatory swamps. A few of these "people" have been killed and it appears that they're now half dragon and half demon. They don't appear to need food or drink and survive only on abducting and turning more victims. It is also discovered that they also do have a less powerful version of that dragon's abilities though they are still formidable opponents. Be careful around these creatures or else you'll end up like them, endlessly hunting and endlessly a slave.

End Times - Man made gods Part 7

Cover for the short story series.

A meteor is predicted to hit Earth today. One person goes about their day like always while another spends it like their last. The first does what they always do, they help others, do their best to work out mistakes in their personality, and change their life for the better. The second does everything they do to repair their image. Before they were lazy and selfish, but now they try to be better people. Though the end appears to be near, the people the second interacts with doesn't take too kindly to their charity, but accepts the first's. Not wanting to be rejected, the second gives everything thee can to make it up to the people they want to impress and they're now indifferent to them. The meteor is supposed to hit the Earth soon and the second person scraps together a suicide method to avoid the pain of the coming apolcalypse. As for the first person, they stay with their family and friends and enjoy their time together. Because the Earth has several natural forces that protects it, the meteor burns up in the atomsphere and doesn't affect the Earth at all. The first person thanks God and goes about their day like always.
Now it's not to say other religious and non religious people who were like these two, but you could say that most religious people were. They have a real reason to constantly give and improve themselves not only to please God, but to make everything better around them for the salvation of others first and foremost and themselves last. What is the point of non religious people helping the lives of others? They operate by their own standards. They give humanity their own value that is different from your everyone else's. They might sacrifice themselves for others, but that's because they were taught to do that from religious people who know that sacrificing your life is a show of true love and strength. The non religious lack a fundamental reason to love and care for others. They have no reason to covert others to their shallow belief therefore they lack reason. That's not to say that all religious people will do the right things and to say that all religions have the right idea, but at least they have a piece of the truth. Make yourself gods if you wish by dictating what you think is the truth without a thought about what other people say or even what the one true God says. You'll just end up like the gods of old, forgotten and fake.

Tuesday, August 22, 2017

Only One Truth - Man made gods Part 6

Man heard the devil talk about things that made sense to them and they worshipped him. They sacrificed their lives and the lives of other's to the deceiver's will thinking that they're right thing.
Man heard man talk about things that made sense to them and they worshipped them. What they can touch and see is everything to them. They decide what is right and wrong and have made gods out of man. They did this and spread their message thinking that they're right.
Man heard nature talk and they worshipped it. It didn't say much, but man gave it a voice and taught others about it thinking that they're right.
Man heard God talk and they worshipped Him. Some mixed up His words, some give it a different meaning, and others followed what He said the way He wanted. All groups teach others what they know thinking that they're right.
All of these people think what they're doing is right, but only one is right while the others are completely wrong.

Monday, August 21, 2017

Rejecting Weakness - Man made gods Part 5

Being a busy world where hard work equals big rewards, it's no wonder why someone like Nathaniel would work hard every day. He works as an electrician and as a result, he gets dirty, hurt, and tired beyond belief constantly. There are times that shortcuts present themselves to him, but he never takes them as they would lessen the quality of his work or disadvantage someone else so he stays fair so he in turn can also be treated fairly. Nathaniel doesn't have any relatives as they've all died of diseases and he doesn't have any friends so he lives his life alone wishing someone was there who could talk to him, care about him, and understand him. Alas he doesn't know where to look and is too busy right now to think about it. As he works on repairing the electrical systems of a business building, there are a couple of things he could do so that the system will be good for a while, but he'll need to come back every couple months or so. The business does pay good money for him to do repairs since they trust the company he works. If he doesn't, it could be a while before he gets another good paycheck such as this one.
"Do it," a voice in his head says.
Nah, he thinks to himself. He fixes the electrical system the way he's supposed to and makes sure everything works as they should.
A month passes by and his loneliness takes its toll on him as he doesn't feel as good as he used to. He still keeps his work ethic and does his jobs efficiently and properly. Nathaniel isn't able to get any real rest or any form of comfort though. It's been this way for a few years and he might be on the edge of breaking.
This next job involves fixing another electrical problem in the crawlspace of a house. As he looks through the crawlspace, he finds several valuable antiques that could be very valuable. The owner of the house didn't tell him anything about items being down here so they wouldn't know if he took anything.
"Do it," a voice in his head says.
No, Nathaniel thinks to himself. He takes the items and shows them to the owner of the house and it turns out that the items are valuable family heirlooms that the owner forgot they had. Nathaniel is thanked and given a good tip as a thank you. The owner plans on selling these antiques to give their family much needed financial relief and a small vacation.
Another month passes by and Nathaniel is getting a bit sick due to his decaying emotions. He still works as hard as always though they don't reap any special rewards.
Today's job has him fixing a hospital building's electrical systems. They're paying him double since the electricity in this building is incredibly important in saving lives here and keeping them alive. There are things in this building's electrical systems that could allow him to make constant visits to fix it like the business building at the risk of the building's electricity going out for a short amount of time.
"Do it," a voice in his head says.
I can't do it, he thinks to himself.
"But what do the lives of the other people here matter to you? They don't know you so they won't be thankful that you helped their lives continue."
I don't do it for fame or fortune, Nathaniel thinks, I do it because I'm supposed to.
He does what he needs to and leaves the building to his car where he is jumped by a criminal. He is beaten and his wallet is taken away. A nearby police officer chases after the man and retrieves Nathaniel's wallet though the criminal gets away. Nathaniel is thankful though he wishes something good will happen to him later to repay him for today.
A month and a half passes by and Nathaniel becomes sick from not much rest from his job and from his depression. The voice always seems to talk to him on every job and he keeps saying no to it though the offers from it get more and more enticing. Today's job goes over well and the voice doesn't talk to him. It seems like it's going to be a rare good day, but he's attacked by the criminal who jumped him before. Nathaniel lets out all of his pent-up anger out on the criminal and almost beats them up to death.
"Do it," the voice says, "He deserves to die. Take everything off his body and sell it to make your life better."
No! I'm not going to listen to you! Nathaniel thinks as he just sits on the criminal and calls for the cops to arrest him. He is given a cash reward for getting this criminal who has evaded arrest for a while. Even though Nathaniel has a good amount of money in his pocket now, this still doesn't solve his depression and loneliness. Sure he can buy a prostitute or something like that, but that'll only last a day. He wants something that will like a lifetime. Someone who will be with him for the rest of his life. Lo and behold a woman walks up to him and talks about how brave he was for beating up that criminal and staying his hand to avoid killing him. She wants to know how he gets his strength and he tells her his story. The two eventually bond and get married a couple years after. Good things come to those who wait even if that wait can feel like a lifetime.

Saturday, August 19, 2017

Is Death so Evil? - Man made gods Part 4

Mankind has such a fascination with life in death that it deals in it every day. It is no wonder why so many stories deal with them and why so many people deal against and with life and death. Killers are a type of people who deal in death almost daily to a point where it became a profession. The military, assassins, hitmen, serial killers, vigilantes and even law enforcement and doctors will deal in death when needed. This story deals with a set of killers, The Crimson Killers, who are going after another group of killers, Judas' Disciples. They've chased them down to a forest where they hope to end the other's reign of death. While hunting them down, echoes of the Disciples talking about mercy and telling them to turn around or else. The Crimson Killers ignore this and go after the Disciples, but are ambushed one after the other and killed horrifically. One is sliced in half, another is dosed in acid, and  another is beaten to death with bare fists. The last one's limbs are chopped off then their head is cut off. The remains of the killers are properly buried and prayed over. Family's of the Crimson Killers are secretly sent the location of their bodies, but not much is done with the information. Judas' Disciples are killers who have turned from their evil ways to serve the Truth. When they aren't working under the name, Judas' Disciples, they're doing charity work, serving in the police, the military, and in the science and medical industry. When they do work under the name Judas' Disciples, they fight against killers who attack them first. They use tactics of old since self-defense is the only option. It is said that God prioritizes the people who are the farthest gone so others can see if they can be saved. These people in turn give their talents and abilities to the greater cause. People like Judas' Disciples evoke the Wrath of God and there is no mercy for those who chose to kill first and don't take the second chance given to them.

Another story sees a wounded veteran is being sent to a hospital. He gets put under for surgery, but when he wakes up, he's tied to several medical devices that keep track of his condition. There are several other people who have been operated on in the room. Some are severally mutated while others are gored beyond recognition. The marine quickly disconnects himself from the medical devices and waits for whoever sent him here to notice the disconnection. A couple people in medical outfits come in and he knocks out one of them and questions the other. The one tells him that they're in a special facility where they do secret tests to increase the lives of humans, but from what the veteran has seen, this isn't the case so he knocks out this man and explores the facility. He evades detection long enough to find out more on this mysterious organization. They're keeping people who are on the edge of death from their diseases and injuries alive to further their research. Most of these people are still in severe pain and continually suffer as long as they're kept alive so the veteran tries to find a way to shut off the facility's power. With his military training, he gets past all of the security and finds the explosives to blow up the main power source to the building. He gets to it, however, a researcher finds him.
The researcher says, "Stop it! If you do that, all of the research we've done over the years would go to waste! The deaths of the people who have been sacrificed for our cause would be for nothing!"
"This is tainted research!" the veteran snaps back, "It's already been for nothing!"
"What about the people who are still alive?! I've given them immorality!"
"And I'm about to give a lot more people that."
The veteran blows up the facility along with everyone in it including himself.

The Men Who Try to Kill God - Man made gods Part 3

There exists an ancient temple that is said to have the key to killing God Himself. Many have gone in and came out afraid of everything around them, others have become devout worshipers of God, and some go insane. Another man named Calvin enters the temple to see if he can do it. The first thing he finds is a mysterious man sitting at a table.
"What are you doing here? Are you here to find the secret to kill God?" Calvin asks.
The man smiles and says, "I didn't know that was in this temple. I just like sitting at this table. The chair is very comfortable. Sit with me."
Calvin sits with the man and feels an odd comfort while being with this man.
"Why do you want to kill God?" the man asks.
"He's the source of everything that's everything that's evil in the world."
"Are you sure of that?"
"Of course. How else can you explain all of the evil of the world? The people, the diseases, the death."
"People have the free choice of being evil or good."
"That doesn't matter."
"So why don't you try removing their free will and diseases?"
"I will and that will kill God."
"I'm sure it will."
Calvin exits the temple and tries to do what he said and ends up becoming an evil scientist who tries to wipe out humanity's free will and choice. He gets sentenced to a lifetime in jail.
Another person enters the temple. Her name is Beatrice and she encounters the same man Calvin did. He offers the same thing Calvin did and she sits beside the man.
"Why do you want to kill God?" the man asks her.
"Because life is unfair to me," she answers.
"Why are you such an important person?"
"Because I feel like I am."
"So go out and make yourself god."
"I will and that will kill God."
Beatrice goes out and tries to make the world worship her as if she were God, but they could care less about her as she isn't anything special. She kills herself in her depression.
Another person enters the temple. His name is Dale and the same thing happens with him.
"Why do you want to kill God?" the man asks.
"Why not?" Dale answers, "It's a challenge that no one else could accomplish."
"It is said that God lives through his faithful servants."
"Yes. I will kill them and that will kill God."
Dale tries to kill as many religious people as possible, but he ends up being gunned down by the law enforcement. Another person enters the temple. Her name is Violet and the same thing happens with her.
"Who are you?" Violet asks the man.
"I am," the man answers.
Violent shoots the man in the head with a pistol.
"That's what I thought," she says.
She then exits the temple, but someone touches her shoulder from behind.
"Why do you forsake me?" the man asks Violet with a smile.
Violet tries to shoot the man several times, but he doesn't fall down and just stands there with his arms out.
"You're making a mistake," the man says, "I'll give you another chance among the many chances I've given you. Walk with me and you'll know true happiness and you'll destroy the true source of evil."
He holds out his hand which she hesitantly takes. She later becomes a devote member of the church by helping the poor, taking care of the sick, and loving her enemies. Because of this, she helps the world be rid of a little evil in the world. A little, but a lot combined with the efforts of other people. She later becomes a saint.
Another person enters the temple. His name is Rick and the same thing happens with him.
"Why do you want to kill God?" the man asks with a welcoming smile on his face.

Friday, August 18, 2017

Life without purpose - Man made gods part 2

Another killer, a different start.
Life has no purpose to Seth. No meaning. All of the good that is done in the world is for nothing since evil is still prominent and seems to be unending. No reason to live just survival and good moments and events just keep you going to suffer more and for what? Seth can't find a reason and thinks what he thinks is true. Who really gives humanity any value if you can just say it's all relative?Who are you to tell him what's write and wrong?  If what makes him feel good only matters, then why not take everything he wants. He takes a sharp knife from his kitchen and goes out to kill and steal from his neighbor. Seth does so successfully and takes everything they own and he goes on a shopping spree to buy everything that he could ever want. The satisfaction of getting everything and wasting all of his and his neighbor's money lasts only a day so he has to be satisfied in another way. He rapes a woman then a man then a child then a dog, each one of his victims he kills after he's done with them. These things only give him satisfaction for only so long and he goes for one more buzz. He takes a ton of drugs, drinks bottles of alcohol, and buys a bunch of weapons and goes on a killing spree in town. He gets taken down by the police and vigilante civilians, but not after taking forty or so people with him.
A different story sees a woman giving up on life, spending all of her money, and maxing out all her credit cards for one last shopping spree on everything that she enjoys. She enjoys it for a couple days then ends her life with a noose. What a life to live when you make it about making it all about feeling good.

New eBook giveaway!

https://giveaway.amazon.com/p/4b936705d2546672

My new book in eBook form is being given away with 23 copies available. Check out my newest story in the Choice and Consequence series that's a romance story with a psychological horror edge to it.

I have the first two chapters as samples so take a look at that if you're interested or not convinced about entering. The eBook is $1 and the physical is $6 so it's cheap if you just want to buy it.

Thursday, August 17, 2017

Judge, Jury, and Executioner - Man made gods

Just going to write a few free short stories that deal here since these can't be made into full ones and so I can stay in practice while I take a break. I might publish a collection of them if I write enough like I did with Hopeless.

In a gunfight in the middle of the city, Damian's family gets killed in the crossfire. Though Damian gets shoot as well, he survives, but his sanity doesn't survive. The cops couldn't arrest the shooters since they got away and they aren't going after them as they have other crimes to deal with. Since Damian is a high ranking military officer, he gets the police to give him access to their database and he uses this to finds his family's killers. After secretly taking ammo and weapons from the police station, he goes out to kill. He ends up killing over twenty people in one day as they were associated with the people who killed his family. This gave him a special kind of satisfaction unlike any other. He wants to feel it again so he accesses the police database again and prints up a huge list of criminals and their known locations. With his full arsonal that he took from the military, he goes after each and every single criminal and kills them all including those associated with them. This feeling that he has is now insatiable so he steps up his targets. He takes a jet from an airfield and bombs a prison. After this, he knows that the military is onto him that he goes around killing people so he goes under the radar, but there are plenty of people left to kill who harm the innocent. There are governments who harm the people they govern and other countries they come in contact to so he goes after them next. He gets rid of one set of governors, but when he gets rid of another and comes back another leader has taken the previous' place. The people of the country are the ones to blame for the country's state which is clear to Damian. He sneaks into a military base and launches several nukes at the country which completely annihilates it. It also starts a nuclear war between several countries. Now there's another target who kills the innocent, him. So he takes a pistol. And shoots himself.

Wednesday, August 16, 2017

Short Writing Break

Since I've published 20 books in a year since my first book came out, I'll be taking a short break where I won't exactly be writing. I'll be drawing designs for the next book(s) and organizing which ones to publish first and how the story goes. One of them I already have planned to be a free eBook in October. I'll start a giveaway for Choice and Consequence of Romance (eBook) on Friday when I get paid and 20 or more copies will be available. I'll also have a giveaway for So Good, but So Evil (eBook) later though with fewer copies since some people that I gave it to said that "it was of a particular taste" and I totally agree with them. If you look at my Patreon, I've updated it a bit so the rewards are better so check that out if it interests you. Every bit helps so I can do more giveaways and write more stories. Thank you!

Tuesday, August 15, 2017

A short paper on Speculum Humanae - Human mirror - The reason behind the psychological occurences in the Choice and Consequence series

This paper is written to give a summary of the human condition that has been going on for years and yet, we still know little about it. We've dubbed the condition Speculum Humanae or the Human Mirror as it appears to show people who have it themselves or the worst parts of themselves in most if not all scenarios. Thanks to the people of Hillside city, we've had more people to interview and study so we can nail down the cause and effect of the Human Mirror.

Basics
  • A human being will obtain the condition once they hit a point in their life where the stress of life on them is at their highest.
  • Some people won't get this condition in their life if they don't hit this point in their life or don't attempt to test themselves.
  • There are other people who will have this condition, but write it off as nightmares or bad day dreaming.
  • This condition appears to be testing who has it so the person can define themselves for the rest of their life with various "puzzles" and situations that test the person's particular skill set.
  • The condition itself has apparently existed since the beginning of human existence as ancient stories perfectly parallel the stories these patients tell and has only been started to be studied in the early 1900s.
  • Monsters based on the person's personality manifest in the person's mind. Some attack, some help, and some don't do anything.

  • Another entity that appears person in the person's mind, is a being known as the other him/her, which is a person like the original person except they're more honest about themselves according to the patients. They always have a black scar on their front that looks like the symbols for male and female. On the back, they have the same symbol which might be the symbol for humanity.
  • Transsexuals will always see their original sex on the other him/her entity no matter what their sex they is currently.
  • Paranormal and spiritual occurances might happen (50/50 chance).


Physical effects
  • The brain's condition doesn't appear to change even when the person is actively experiencing the condition save for the stress of the situations which the condition presents.
  • Scars and physical injuries will appear on the patient's body if are attacked by their personality monsters even if the patient is wearing clothes or protective clothing.
  • A person might be controlled by the condition to do certain things or go certain places, but not extreme things such as violence (sexual or brutal) or suicide unless the person allows it.

Unknown effects
  • A person might mysteriously appear in a different location (even if the person is in solitary) when they're not watched (rare).
  • Spirtual occurances will make the person see God as they say along with two other individuals who also claim to be God.
  • A person might encounter the devil or Satan and will spiritually be in Hell (rare).
  • A "fake out death" might occur when the condition "kills" the person, but actually doesn't. It appears to do this to prove a point or to give the person another chance.
  • The condition always puts the person who has it on a path that it plans so that they do not encounter any challenges that the person cannot overcome.

Final results
  • There are various ending results when the person completes the "game" the condition presents; suicide, insanity, vigilantism, becoming normal/self healed, being better than they used to be, a need to help others or change the world.
  • After that, the condition will completely disappear from them.
Conclusion
We still have much to learn about the Human Mirror though what we've learned appears to be all we can know as if we're blocked by outside forces to learn more about it. As we are now, we can help the people with this condition as best we can, but it appears that what happens to them is up to them.

Smashwords results

If you were wondering about the results of my little Smashwords sale in July, then here they are.
- 39 copies of my paid books were downloaded with They Don't Know being the most popular one for some reason.
- 109 copies of my regular free books were downloaded.
To anybody who did this as well or thinks of putting out their work for free, then do this as well to get people to take a look at your work though whether or not they like it and/or talk about to others to completely up to the customer.

Story writing help: Finding influences

A video where I talk about finding story influences in a very nearby place.

I've just submitted the files for my next book so it should be out by this week. I've released twenty books in at least a year. That's how many books I've had under wraps since my senior year of highschool. By next year, I'll probably have 40 or more. Pretty cool right? Support my work on Patreon if you want cool rewards including having story samples sent to you and even full books for free.

Monday, August 14, 2017

Sample of: Choice and Consequence of Romance (Chapters 1 & 2)

*never mind what I said in the previous post. I have a sample for my upcoming story here now and I'll get to publishing it tomorrow.
Chapter 1 – I Would Do Anything For Love
Recalling events that led her to this place, Harley walks through a gang hideout that’s covered in blood, bodies, and bullet casings. There’s a single officer down at the back of the hideout who she kneels to touch, but once she does, it comes to life and whacks her across the head. This is where her life took a turn for the worst, a memory that’s painful to remember. She collects herself and drags two body bags to an open coffin that she puts them in. The bodies spring up as she closes the coffin. With great satisfaction, she smiles at it and looks up at the night sky which switches to afternoon as she stops daydreaming.
A woman with her husband next to her say, “Thank you for being here and paying for the funeral for my boy. He always wanted to be a police officer. He said that’s what he wanted to be when he grows up.”
The woman is then brought to tears, but quickly comforted by her husband.
“It’s no problem. Just give us a call if you need anything and we’ll be happy to help.”
The boy whose funeral it is died trying to play police officer when someone was getting robbed. Unfortunately, the robber didn’t care much for kids and killed him so when the robber was later killed, no one cared that she was killed as well even though nobody knows or cares if the officers tried to take her alive.
Harley usually holds special occasions for people whose lives have been directly impacted by crime such as this one. She’s famous for being one of the few female police chiefs, not only in the country, but in the world. Over her career, she’s taken down many criminals, shown mercy when no one else would, and was charitable when there was not much to give. She’s done all this, not just to be a role model or to rise through the ranks, but to protect her beloved lover Alex, the only one who has kept her going for all of her adult life. The only one who she thinks truly understands her. He’s been her moral compass, her inspiration, and absolutely everything positive you could think of. She can imagine him waiting for her at her parked undercover police car.
Her imagination of Alex says to her, “That was a great thing you did. I’m sure the boy will rest in peace knowing that his name will be placed among the bravest officers in this city.”
Harley blushes and smiles gleefully then drives off back to the main police station.
At the entrance, Romanova, the woman at the main desk asks, “Did the funeral go well?”
“Yes, it did. The parents were happy that he’s recognized as a brave officer though it doesn’t help them that much.”
“You know things like this take time.”
“I know but I always wish there was a way to give them a more immediate form of comfort.”
“Me too.”
“I better get to work. Have a nice day!”
“You too!”
Harley says hi to everyone she makes eye contact with on her way to her office. She enters it and looks over the case file for her new self-assigned assignment. Juliet and Rose enter just as Harley was about to call for them.
“Just in time,” Harley says, “Anything new about this case you got for me?”
Rose steps up and puts several files on Harley’s desk then says, “We have these other cases that could be connected to this one. I’ve found a several criminal groups that keep popping up across all of them with similar situations.”
“Juliet told me about them already, is there anything else?”
Rose turns to Juliet.
Confused by Rose’s look, she asks, “What? Did you want to feel special telling her yourself?”
Rose answers, “I thought I was supposed to be your superior and you were supposed to be my assistant, deputy.”
“It doesn’t matter to me who gives me the information as long as I get ASAP,” Harley adds in, “I’ll go to the locations you girls found to be the best ones to find more information at.”
“You don’t want us to go with you?” Juliet asks.
“I’ll ask you if I do.”
“You sure about that boss?” Rose says, “You are the chief after all-”
“This case is very personal to me and you know that we do things differently here in Hillside city. You also know my skills and they haven’t rusted one bit.”
“Of course.”
“I know how highly skilled you both are and I’ll let you look at some of these other places. Deal?”
“Yes mam!” they both say.
Harley gives them places to investigate and looks over the personal case again to think of what’s the best place to look first. The case is all about Alex’s parents and family disappearing mysteriously. Alex went to their house one day to not find them anywhere though the house was in perfect condition. They didn’t pick up their cellphones nor did anyone in family know where they were. Harley went into investigate the house and found secret rooms and evidence that the rest of the family is connected to the newest big gang in the city, The Los Inocentes, a gang that takes credit for the deeds of other gangs while copying many of their styles. No one could even believe that this was true, but when Harley and her police force searched for the rest of Alex’s family who lives in Hillside City, they could not be found at all as if they vanished like the parents. Some of the evidence found by Harley can damn the family, excluding Alex, to life in jail or execution, but I can also bring down the Los Inocentes. Alex didn’t want to get married to Harley without his parents’ approval, but he begrudgingly says that it would be right to bring them to justice if the connection was proved to be one hundred percent true. He’d also marry Harley without their approval, if again, this was true.
There are two huge rewards for her here; the honor of bringing down an infamous gang and marrying the one she loves the most. With her purpose renewed, she heads out to a location that might give her the best answers. It’s a small upper middle-class house that Harley always wondered how some of Alex’s friends could afford to live in it. Once she gets there, the house darkens, shakes, contorts, and decays.
Familiar female voice in the darkness says, “Feeling alone in the world can be one of the worst feelings that a person can feel. Loneliness can lead to the deterioration of the mind resulting in depression, suicidal thoughts, and feelings of uselessness. Feelings like these destroy a person from the inside which makes them into a broken person who want some way to get rid of these feelings as quick as possible.”
The four glass mirrors in the house shatter then shape themselves to be human figures. They throw pieces of themselves at Harley which she quickly shoots back at them. She then shoots the glass mirrors themselves but they shatter then comes back together undamaged. Making a tactical retreat, she runs away deeper into the house while shooting the monsters to slow down their pursuit. She passes by a painting of a thinking brain and takes a breather in a storage closet. There she sees a bottle with a depressed individual on it. Thinking of what the voice said before, she takes it to use on the painting, however, she waits for the glass mirrors to pass by. In the meantime, she checks her ammo and sees that she’s somehow not lost any ammo despite all the shooting. The monsters can’t be heard from where she’s from so she exits the closet and heads to the painting. She splashes the bottle’s liquids onto the painting which deteriorates it and reveals two clips of special ammo with blue bullets. Now with hopefully better ammunition, she makes noise to attract the attention of the glass mirrors and they come to her. She shoots them and their oncoming attacks which damages them and kills them. The darkness and decay lifts from the house and the bodies of the monsters disappear. Harley checks her ammo again and the blue bullets are gone and she still hasn’t used any of her ammo. Events like these are normal to Harley and because of this, she has some control over it. She’s heard of various religious explanations for it, scientific ones, and other random ones that do line up in ideas, but she doesn’t care about it. Nobody knows that Harley has this condition and she keeps it that way. It’s just another crazy phenomenon that happens to people in her mind.
Now that, that’s out of the way, she investigates the house and finds a special room where she finds the sitting dead bodies of Alex’s friends tied to chairs in a circle. Harley calls over her two of her favorite officers to look at the scene once they’re done where they’re at. They come over thirty minutes later and analyze the scene.
“What do you think happen?” Harley asks.
“Judging by the way they are, it looks like they were almost forced to be here then they were sacrificed one by one in some sort of fanatical religious group,” Rose answers.
“You think they wanted to back out at the last second?” Juliet asks.
“That’s possible. Look at the symbol that’s carved onto their shoulder.”
“That’s definitely the one used by the Los Inocentes. It’s a symbol they used that’s inspired by a satanic gang.”
“The bodies look like they’ve been dead for a long while, possibly before Alex knew before his family’s disappearance.”
“So Alex’s friends were involved with this too? It seems like the gang is deeply involved with almost everyone Alex knows.”
“Yeah it’s pretty weird how everyone seemed to be in on it except for Alex and you.”
“But you know neither of us would be involved in things like this,” Harley says.
“I know because I see that both of you are great people. I never saw or talked to his family or friends so I can’t really say anything about them.”
“I never thought someone who’s as nice as Alex would have people like this around him,” Juliet adds, “I just seems so strange.”
“Well these people are the only friends of Alex I know of so his friends are completely off the list I guess unless he has more I don’t know about. I should probably go tell him about this when I go home. Did you two find anything at the other locations?”
“Just more places to look and the dead bodies of people who looked like they were killed after finding the information we found.”
“That’s how you know we’re on the right track when getting this information becomes dangerous to have. We should see where this evidence takes us later tomorrow. Get some rest and we’ll hit more than two locations each. Sound good?”
“Yes mam!” they both say.
After adding their reports and such to the police station, they went their separate ways and went home. At home, Harley tells Alex what she found and he became upset since he never thought his friends would end up this way.
“You’ll always have me with you. That’s not just a promise, it’s a fact,” Harley states.
“I trust you with that. This whole situation is so fucked up and crazy! Why is everyone I know involved in this gang? How could we not see this?” Alex says with tears in his eyes.
Harley hugs Alex since she can’t stand someone who she thinks is the strongest person she knows being brought to tears.
“Some people are really good at hiding their dirty secrets in plain sight. I’ll make everything right so we can have a perfect marriage and a perfect life together here with everyone in the city.”
“Heh, and I thought the man was the supposed to be the strong support of the family.”
“You are! You’re everything that’s keeping me alive and happy! Just keep being happy with me so nothing can hurt us.”
“Alright, but I promise you that I’ll do more for you than just being morale support.”
“Of course you will. You always do.”



Chapter 2 – Paper Trail
Harley gets up early the next morning to get to work on investigating the locations of interest. This next one is yet another house like the previous one except isn’t so large and more normal. It’s a house that belongs to cousins of Alex’s so the connection between his family and the Los Inocentes. The same thing that happened in the previous building happens again with the inside of the house decaying and the light turning pitch black.
The same familiar female voice speaks and her voice echoes throughout the building. She says, “Love is an emotion felt by everyone that can get taken for granted. It can give people a reason to keep living and deal with hard times, however, an excess want of love can make people want to obtain it like an addictive drug. Once they find a consistent source of love, they never let go of it lest they lose their mind.”
The house looks radically bigger now that it’s changed. Every door is unlocked and in one room, she finds red pistol ammo on top of a bed with human silhouettes. There is one special big door strapped with chains, however, that is locked with a pressure plate in front of it. Harley steps on it, but she doesn’t weigh enough for it to open and it appears that something needs to stay there so the door can completely open. While she walks throughout the house, she checks her pistol clips and finds that she has an extra clip with the blue ammo from last time. A screech in the house sparks her attention and she goes to it to find what looks to be a piece of a living organ trying to hug or mate with mannequins and human-like objects in the room. Its sharp appendages try to attach itself to things but they just break or are unsatisfactory to the monster. Harley tries to shoot it with the blue ammo to kill it, but this in fact, only makes it upset as it goes after her. She switches to red ammo and that calms it down and go back to what it was doing. Maybe that monster is what needs to go on the pressure plate and yet, the organ looking monster looks incomplete. There must be another one in the house and Harley finds it not too far away from the first. Its skin is lighter in tone and it tries to insert things into its holes as if they give it pleasure. Harley shoots it with the blue ammo to get it to follow her to the next monster. Once the two “see” each other, they combine to make a beating heart that roll around the room, which also shakes up the house. Now that the two are together, Harley must get them to the pressure plate, but once she leaves the room, the house forces her to take a certain path throughout it by closing off doorways and passages while offering new ones not seen before. All while this is happening the beating heart chases her to crush her beneath it. The chained door is just ahead and there’s just enough room for Harley to let the beating heart pass by her and sit on top of the pressure plate that wraps it in barb wire to keep it in place. Now that the door is opened, everything goes back to normal.
As Harley opens the door, someone shoot it from the other side, forcing her to take cover on the wall.
The man who is one of Alex’s cousins says, “I know who you are and what you’ve done! You’re not going to get away with it! That bitch Alex is going to get it along with the rest of the damned police force!”
Harley tries to calm the man down by saying, “I don’t exactly know what you’re talking about, but we can talk about this you know.”
“No we can’t and you know that!”
Knowing what he’s going to do, she quickly pops out of cover and shoots the man in the head. After which, she sees that he has files in packages along with food, water, and ammo as if he was going to make his last stand there until he died. These files tell of a plan by Alex’s family to eliminate or bog down the police force in the city to have the Los Inocentes as a dominant force in the city like how they are in their country of origin. It also explains that Alex wasn’t told to be part of the gang since he’s such a Gary Stu type person. They think he would’ve ratted them out to Harley. She thinks this as well and is thankful that they didn’t involve him in their plans. Not wanting to just hit one location like Harley said yesterday, she deposits the evidence to the police station and goes off to another location.
This one is an apartment that coincidentally was condemned because of a fire fight that the police had with the Los Inocentes. Several Alex’s aunts and uncles lived here and now the reasons why Harley is here make their living here make sense. The same thing that’s been happening happens again with this location.
The disembodied female voice says, “People who are aggressive are naturally very touchy and not too friendly with others. This could be the result of abuse, neglect, or humiliation by others. There are few that could break through the walls that aggressive people put up to find the compassion within them.”
A black scorpion-like creature that stands up on three legs appears to Harley. It has green acid dripping out of its mouth and another vaginal-like mouth on its chest. The first thing it does is try to ram her and when she tries to dodge it, it slashes at her with its arms and tail. Using her red bullets, she calms it down for a few seconds before going back to being aggressive. Harley goes through each room while trying to avoid the creature which doesn’t work for long as it breaks down all the walls in between them. There then comes a door which is locked so Harley tricks the monster to break it down. Once it does, a giant bee-like insect with stingers for feet kill the black scorpion creature by stabbing it in its chest mouth which then spits out a green clip of pistol ammo towards Harley. She shoots this ammo at the bee to see what it does and it ends up bringing the bee under her control. In her mind, she thinks she could’ve really used this in the previous house, but she also thinks that the red ammo helped here as well. The bee follows her throughout the apartment while breaking through whatever walls she commands it to and holes whatever pressure plates it’s told to. Its usefulness comes to an end when a giant red ant breaks through the ventilation and devours it using its mouth on its chest that is similar to the black scorpion’s. This ant stands up on two feet and is more aggressive than the other insects as it instantly goes for Harley and doesn’t stop. The yellow ammo only slows it down for a second before it goes back to its rampage. She then thinks to use the red ammo and only when she unloads the clip into it does it take effect to calm it down and allow the yellow ammo to take effect. The ant then breaks and moves whatever Harley needs out of the way before it suddenly dies at a certain door at the top floor.
Everything goes back to normal once she opens the door to find the remnants of a firefight. Harley finds the bodies of several uncles, aunts, and other family members of Alex along with people that have a Los Inocentes tattoo. Among the massacre, she finds plans to assault the police station with various secrets of it that Harley remembers telling Alex’s family when she took them for a tour of the station. This has to be one of the biggest mistakes Harley has done, but at least she’s trying to make up for it now. There are also hints as to what the main base of operation for the Los Inocentes looks like. No one knows what it looks like, where it is, or where to even begin to look for it. Only high-ranking members of the gang are allowed to see the trip from wherever they are to the actual location while others are blinded even lower ranking members. Harley calls this into the station to get her other agents on this while she calls a meeting with Rose and Juliet back in her office.
“What have you got for me?” Harley asks them.
Rose starts out by saying, “Nothing new that you haven’t seen. It’s just information backing up what you found. In fighting in the gang, connections to Alex’s family while excluding him, and hints as to what the location of their hideout is.”
“With all of this, we could bring down the gang in a matter of days,” Juliet boldly states, “We’re well armed and smart enough. All we need are the correct targets and the gang falls over like a stack of cards.”
“I think you girls should have the day off the tomorrow. I’ll have some of my forensic investigators take a look at the scenes and the information we found to point us in the right directions.”
“Are you sure about that?” Juliet asks.
“Yes. The jobs you girls are great at are combat and investigation. Forensics aren’t exactly your field so let the others take care of it and rest so you’ll have plenty of energy to take down the Los Inocentes once and for all. Good?”
“Yes mam!” they say.
After this long day of work, Harley goes home and sees that Alex is fully dressed up.
“What’s the occasion you’re going to?” she asks.
“We’re going out to dinner.”
“Thank you for treating me out of nowhere-”
“Your two friends are coming. I called and already told them before you came in.”
“Oh…well that’s good.”
“Is there a problem with that? I thought you love going out with them and me together?”
“I do, I do! What about Morgan?”
“She’s working overnight on some patients she has. I could talk to her about it later. I am a physician’s assistant after all.”
“We have to get that girl a boyfriend. Let me get changed quickly.”
Harley gets changed into a dressy white shirt, black jeans, and dressy flat black shoes. The two get in their car and Alex drives them to the nice restaurant uptown. Once they get there, they see that Rose and Juliet aren’t dressed as nicely and are just wearing casual clothes.
Rose sees how the couple are dressed and as they sit down, she distressingly says, “Oh I didn’t know that we were supposed to get dressed up for this occasion. I thought it was just a normal dinner.”
“I actually don’t have any dressy outfits,” Juliet admits.
“It’s ok girls,” Alex assures, “I was taught to be more traditional about things.”
Rose and Juliet hold their tongue about inquiring about his family given the present situation.
He continues by saying, “So have you girls found anything new?”
All three of them stay quiet. A waiter comes by to take their orders and they stay quiet after that as well.
Alex hits the table.
“Damn it, I get that my family is connected with the Los Inocentes-”
“We know you’re innocent,” Juliet interrupts.
Alex continues by saying, “That’s great knowing something both you and I already know, but I want to hear something new. Did you arrest any of them yet?”
Harley slowly answers, “…We found the dead bodies of your uncles and aunts and,” she swallows her regret, “I killed one of your cousins in self-defense.”
There’s silence among them for a solid minute.
Alex then rubs his face a couple times before saying, “Ok, ok…ok…I’m good. I’m glad that you’re alive Harley. I’m glad that you’re the only one I know of besides you two that are always honest with me.”
The dinner stays mostly ok with Juliet and Rose bringing up TV shows and movies to try to lighten the mood. Later when they go home, Alex almost seems to break down, but he holds it in and shows a smile to Harley who is deeply worried about him. He reminds himself that he must be strong so Harley can be as equally or even stronger than he is.