Friday, February 11, 2022

Sanctification Through Fire: Chapter 1 – Ignition of a Quest

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Chapter 1 – Ignition of a Quest

The world burns. After so many centuries of rot, violence, and sin, the blood-soaked world dries up to fire. One day, the sun seemed to grow wings under a bird made of fire descended on earth and set everything on fire including the moon. Those who are in a state of grace stay on fire as the divine flame burns the sin within their soul. On the other hand, those who reject the pains of the flames become what’s known as the charred and only endure some of the heat of the world, but to no profit to their soul. These sinners suffer the flames and pains of life for no reason and cling to their passions for as long as they can in this burning world.

In this world that is meeting its end, a young woman by the name of Oriana is one of the soldiers of the Church sends out to bring those outside of it to repentance. She is distinguished from her peers only by her mohawk flame hair, flame scarf, a distinctive dress of fire that’s different from the other girls, and the places on her body where she isn’t on fire. Otherwise, she is no different. She carries the same whip of penance as the girls and boys do and has no achievements in battle. Her squad and she have been deployed on a hunt to bring back more lost souls, but it seems like they are the ones who are hunted since they are ambushed on the way to the place they planned to ambush the charred.

The chaos separates Oriana from the other soldiers. Seeing that she is alone, the charred gang up on her, but before they overwhelm her, she takes out a few of them before catching sight of someone that she thought she would never see again or at least hope not to see again. Oriana and the young man she knows look at each other in disgust before he tells the charred around him to go after her.

Before the charred descend upon her, Oriana is saved by her fellow soldiers and the battle is evened out.

“Isn’t that Umbriel, your ex?” one of Oriana’s fellow soldiers asks.

“Unfortunately, yes,” Oriana says.

“Don’t show mercy to him.”

“Like I need to be reminded of that.”

As the fight goes on, the two sides separate as one goes after the other. Oriana then catches Umbriel and his group running away and it isn’t until she is a fair distance away that she notices that she’s the only one chasing them.

At this moment she says to herself and to God in part, “How did it end up this way? I can’t go back now. I just wish it wasn’t me doing this by myself.”

Part of herself wants to punish Umbriel for his betrayal but another part wants to leave him alone and forget that she even saw him.

“That idiot. Why now of all times? Why, God, have you made me cross paths with him again?” she continues.

With seemingly no choice but to continue forward, Oriana does so and comes across a town that the charred are ransacking for supplies to heal their wounded and forcibly bolster their numbers by giving the townspeople the choice to join them or die.

Umbriel sees Oriana and gets his charred to surround her then says, “Leave her to me.”

He takes out his sickle and circles her before attacking. They exchange attacks then back off.

“Still dedicated to that corrupt church, are you? When are you going to realize that damned place that our parents forced us into wants the world to burn and people to embrace pain?” Umbriel says.

“There’s more to it than that,” she responds.

“Are you sure about that? Those notched whips are meant to cause the most amount of suffering possible.”

“They cause pain to the soul so that you remember your reliance on God and wake you up from your sinful mind.”

“As if that makes it better. What has God done for the world that’s made it better? First, it was rotting, then it was bleeding, and now it is burning. Has there ever been a point in history that the earth didn’t smell like death? All of us are born weak because of God and we either struggle our entire lives while falling to sin and rising from it or live life how we want to and be punished for it.”

“We are to embrace our weaknesses and learn from them, which is something that you would know if you weren’t so consumed by your weakness.”

“Is being consumed by flames that much better? It’s been so long since I was on fire. How is it being in pain every moment of your life?”

“It’s better than pretending to be God and unlike you, I can handle it.”

The two resume their fight and keep fighting until they reach a standstill. Oriana’s allies finally come to her aid and join the fight; however, the two ex-lovers continue their fight as if a battle isn’t happening around them. She manages to injure Umbriel and he retreats to recover from his wounds.

A commander in her group who is almost completely clothed in flame says to her, “Go after him while we take care of these people!”

“Let the coward retreat! He’s chosen his fate as one of the damned,” Oriana counters.

“Everyone deserves a second chance or we all don’t now go after him!”

“Why me?!”

“Because you know him best, now go! That’s an order! No soul will be left behind!”

Knowing that her soul-cleansing flame will die out if she disobeys her orders, Oriana reluctantly goes after Umbriel. Since she didn’t immediately chase after him, she is unable to find him and has to resort to following his footprints to find him. Because the charred are not one with the divine fire that scorches the earth, they leave footprints that stain the burned earth like blood in the water. These footprints don’t take long to fade away, but since Umbriel passed by recently, Oriana can follow his trail as his footprints disappear. Even so, she can’t see him anywhere.

“Why did you have to be here? Why am I the one who is forced to go after you? This is a pain worse than these flames I suffer,” Oriana says to herself as she continues forward hoping that Umbriel dies from his minor wounds.

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