Saturday, May 24, 2025

First Son of Divine Darkness: Chapter 1 – First Apprentice


Chapter 1 – First Apprentice

My life isn’t all crime-fighting. I’m a father, husband, and inheritor of my family’s legacy. I help run the schools, charities, and hospitals that we own in Meridian and frequently visit them to ensure they are running well and that their concerns are heard. I’ll even help out with whatever they need on any given day, just like my parents did. Even though I don’t practice medicine like they did, I’m still able to run around hospitals, giving people what they need, and help teach at schools, and serve at community centers that feed and give to the poor.

Today, I’m assisting the Knights’ council, which my father and past generations of men built to serve our parish community, its families, and the city's poor. We’ve already prepared and distributed meals to those in need and are cleaning up our hall before decorating it for a school event. Suddenly, a group of armed, masked men kick in the doors of the hall and reveal their intentions by threatening to shoot us unless we hand over our money. Just as we’re about to give them a warm, Meridian City-style no by pulling out our guns to shoot them, a third party intervenes. A man clad in a black and red hood, black gloves, black pants and boots, and a white shirt with a snake resembling the chi rho symbol bursts in, guns blazing, taking out some of the criminals with his revolver while targeting others exclusively with his pistol.

The guys and I keep our guns trained on this mysterious man, thank him for saving us, and ask him what he wants. The man with the red hood makes his guns disappear into thin air as he raises his hands with a smile.

“I came here simply to help you, dark hero,” he says while looking directly at me.

Knowing what he’s talking about, I tell my friends that he’s trustworthy and that I need to talk to him in private, and despite not knowing what he’s talking about, they trust me.

Bringing him over to a room where my friends won’t hear us, I ask, “Why did you seek me out?”

“I want to learn from you, L’Obscurité. I want to be a hero like you are. Have I not proved my dedication by finding out your true identity and saving you from criminals?” he says.

“Finding my true identity is not unique, and what you’ve done is just the first step in impressing me.” I look into the man’s eyes to see the quality of his soul and into his memories for the truth of his intentions. “You seem to be honest, Kane Mundr. Let’s put in some honest work before we get to the real work and take off your hood. You’re among friends here.”

Accepting my request, Kane takes off his hood to reveal a young face with slicked-back black hair. His right eye is light blue and grey, while his left eye is red and black, and both look like the eyes of a snake. My friends don’t question Kane helping us clean up, and I call my friend, the Chief of Police Raymond Ellory, to clean up the remains of the criminals and ignore Kane.

“Kane Mundr was there to ‘save’ you from criminals?” Raymond asks. “He was the villain known as The Guillotine. You put him away in the first few years of your hero work for attempted murder. I think he was going after certain politicians for whatever self-righteous reason.”

“I’ve seen his memories, and he looks to be a genuinely repentant soul. It’s what my powers are supposed to do, so I trust him,” I say.

“I won’t doubt you and your powers. Just be careful, okay, kid?”

“I’ll keep you updated as always, chief.”

After cleaning up, Kane and I take a walk through the busy streets of Meridian.

“That was the Chief of Police on the phone, right?” Kane asks.

“Right. He’s why the police didn’t question you much when they arrived. Back in the day, he would’ve had you sign a contract before doing anything with me,” I say.

“He won’t be much help for the villain I have in mind for us to go after.”

“I need to see you in action again before I think we should work together. There’s work to be done, lives to be saved, and criminals to be punished, after all.”

“Okay…Even though I thought I did enough to impress you, I won’t argue.”

Leading Kane to areas of crime by transforming into my dark hero, L’Obscurité, form, and transporting us instantly. I watch as he shoots criminals with either his revolver or pistol, and question him on it and his particular powers.

“After your powers touched and brought me to repentance, I was able to see if a person should continue living or die. The revolver shoots them with a pellet that injects a substance into people that knocks them out for a day, while my pistol shoots them with bullets that have lethal poisons in them,” Kane explains.

I check for a pulse in the criminals he shot with his revolvers and look into the souls of everyone he shot, and find that he’s telling the truth.

“Fascinating. Let’s continue cleaning up the city,” I say.

“Sure, but can I point out the people who do daylight crime despite the presence of you and other heroes and vigilantes? People aren’t just desperate, stupid, or greedy to do this kind of crime.”

“I know some have connections in legitimate businesses, the government, and law enforcement, both the police and the hero associations. Those kinds of criminals are harder to root out legitimately.”

“Not for a hero like you. You rooted out plenty of them and hung them from a building they were doing business in on the first day you revealed yourself to the public, remember?”

“I remember, but I’m also not as extreme as I was in my earlier years.”

Saying that makes me feel old, even though I’m thirty-two years old.

“So, what? You’ve gone soft now? It doesn’t look like it from what I’ve heard.”

“I’ll explain more after we’ve punished more evil.”

I lead Kane through various parts of the city and watch him effectively clear out entire buildings, warehouses, and streets of crime. We also stop robberies and extortions in between his clearing of areas. He doesn’t seem to be invincible like me, as he actively tries to avoid bullets, and is good at doing so, as he dodges and dances between them at superhuman speeds.

“You can’t take a bullet, can you?” I ask.

“I have tougher skin than most, but no, I cannot, unlike you,” Kane says while pointing at the gun wound in my forehead. “I have to say, I like your new appearance, and that bullet in your head makes you look tougher and scarier. It was your encounter with your brother that convinced me that Timeo Severe and L’Obscurité were the same person. I’m sorry about what happened then.”

“I try not to think about that, despite my parents and siblings all dying in one night. Still, I keep this bullet in my head as part of my appearance as a reminder of that somber day. As for the rest of it, the long hat, the coat of darkness, and the scarf that’s now lower to show the terrifying face behind it, it’s all a result of my growth in power and inspired by the Divinity who gave it to me.”

“How come you aren’t using it to its fullest potential? Why hold back and not let justice flood the city?”

“It inspires the wrong kinds of people and gives them the wrong message. Besides, God gave me my powers, and what happens to those touched by it is decided by Him, not me. I am merely a conduit for His will. The most I can do to influence what happens is by praying for those affected by it to increase their chance at repentance and receiving mercy.”

“Really? All that praying must be working out if you’ve spared more people than killed in recent years. Even so, I know that you know more deserves death than mercy.”

“All of us deserve death instead of mercy. Watch me work and I’ll explain more.”

Taking Kane to another location, I handle the criminals by allowing my dark powers of justice to execute their will upon them. From the shadows, he watches as people are torn to shreds, shot o pieces, stabbed to death by drug needles, beaten to a pulp by the demons that controlled their desires, and other such horrible fates that somehow left them living despite appearing to have gone through an experience that would’ve killed them. For the last criminal, I reach down their throat and tear out their heart, which is a filthy thing with mouths that have sharp teeth in them.

“If you can stand this being in your body and repent, then you’ll live,” I say to the criminal before shoving their heart back down their throat and leaving them to be challenged for their salvation.

I then take Kane out of the area so we can talk.

“What did you notice back there?” I ask him.

“A lot of those people were destined to die, but your prayers and powers gave them more time,” he says.

“Correct. A repentant soul is more likely to never sin again and tell others to do the same.”

“Tch. ‘More likely. ’ The worst of them is more likely to fall back into their old habits.”

“We all do, some of us worse than others, but that doesn’t mean we don’t get another second chance. Remember what happened to you and let that humble you. If you follow me, you’ll find that you’ll be sparing more people than killing and want to spare.”

“You may have a better view of things because you see into people’s souls and memories, but you have to admit that there’s a time when justice needs to be given more than mercy.”

“I know that. Tell me the reason for all of your righteous anger.”

“Can’t you just see them in my memories?”

“I want to hear you tell it to me.”

“My dad was one of the rare honest politicians who never took a bribe from anyone or picked a political side. He just did what he thought was right for the city and damn the consequences for doing so. Well, that attitude got him killed. The people that we’re after staged an accident with AI-driven cars so that he would stop giving them a hard time.”

“That’s what turned you to a life of crime?”

"I admit that I regret my earlier years. I hurt a lot of innocent people who probably didn’t deserve it or knew what was going on to figure out what happened, but there’s no time to regret the past. We have to fix this situation in the present. My mom was so devastated by my dad’s death and what I had become that she had to risk her life to bring my dad’s killers to justice. She contacted my dad’s friends in business and the government, but they sold her out, leaving me clueless about where they took her. All I got was a finger, a toe, and a necklace that I got her for a birthday, along with a note mocking me for my efforts to get back at them and telling me to stop."

“They don’t all deserve to die, and criminals get too greedy or over their heads because they think they have all angles perfectly covered at all times.”

These people may slip up, but they maintain a seemingly endless array of contingency plans for failure. They have friends at all levels of power who can eliminate evidence or manipulate it so they can imprison people they dislike. If that approach fails, they have judges and lawyers who can minimize punishments or extricate them from the situation entirely, such as when they hired a villain to break into a courtroom to stage a fake assassination attempt, had a hero fight and imprison them, merely to create an excuse to keep their ally in protective custody where they enjoy a luxurious prison cell from which they continue to operate.

“I think I know who you’re talking about. They don’t have a name for their group, despite being a collective, but they are known as The White Collars by those who do business with them. I’m pretty sure I’ve done damage to their organization in one way or another, but nothing substantial yet.”

“Why not make them your next target, then? The longer we let them operate as they are, the more people they hurt and kill. Haven’t you seen and heard enough yet to trust me? Is this too big of a challenge for the great, L’Obscurité?”

I consider it for a few seconds in prayer before answering, “Alright. The darkness of justice will fall upon The White Collars through you and me.”

I manifest a dark hand that has a hole in it, similar to the wounds of my God. Kane smiles as he shakes my hand.

“Let’s kick ass, partner,” he says.

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