Saturday, May 31, 2025

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Every hero needs a sidekick, and just when Timeo Severe finds himself in a precarious situation, Kane Mundr saves him. Kane was once a criminal, whom Timeo brought to justice as L'Obscurité. Now, Kane wants to be a hero like him by bringing to justice a nefarious cabal of white-collar criminals. These heinous masterminds are notorious for silencing witnesses and obliterating evidence, all while manipulating the law to serve their greedy interests. Conventional methods won't suffice, and they are ready to push boundaries, ensuring that in this dark game, the guilty pay the ultimate price.

Thursday, May 29, 2025

First Son of Divine Darkness: Chapter 4 – Coiling Around the Wolves

Chapter 4 – Coiling Around the Wolves

As the ball of living, screaming flesh rolls into the center of the city, Kane and I make our way to the prison. Restoration Penitentiary is the largest prison near the city, housing many criminals and villains. It is situated on the desolate outskirts, where there isn’t a house, store, or single gas station for miles. The ground and upper floors contain the typical criminals, while the underground levels hold the superhuman villains. The furthest, darkest, unknown recesses of the prison serve as The White Collars' center of operations. Descending into it, I find the place seems better than the upper floors. It’s almost as if it’s not a prison at all but rather a hotel, considering the steel doors to the cells are ordinary doors with handles, the floors are carpeted, and people move about freely, gambling, dining, and conducting business, as if this isn’t a prison but just an exclusive club. Everyone is either well-dressed in suits and dresses or casually clad in sweats or bathing attire.

Reading through people’s memories, it’s no wonder that they feel so safe down here. If they were ever to be convicted or found out again for their crimes, they have a plan to stage a look-alike to be transferred to another location or executed. They’re all basically ghosts down here who impact the daily lives of the people of Meridian, even though they’re so far away from it. From these people’s memories, I gain the location of most of their safehouses and areas of operation. The rest of the information I’m looking for is supposed to be known by others outside of this prison, but I think I know enough to ruin them for good.

Checking the control room, we find simple switches that control the doors and emergency exits, all of which I break to keep the doors shut and the “prison cells” wide open, all except one that’s already closed and contains a woman who I want to personally question to get more information out of her memories. Her room is almost as luxurious as mine and includes a computer and TV where she is given updates on what is happening in the city, but she is aloof as to what is happening right now until I manifest Kane and myself in the room. She tries to act composed with a smile and a confident look on her face despite jumping out of her chair.

“I heard it was a rumor that L’Obscurité could read people’s memories, phase through anything, and appear out of the light and dark. It’s good to see it confirmed in front of me,” she says before looking at Kane. “And you must be his first sidekick that I’ve been hearing about, Kane Mundr, more famously known as The Guillotine.”

Kane is about to shoot the woman with his pistol until I stop him by raising my hand.

“Let me talk to her first,” I say.

“What’s there to ask me if you can read my memories?”

“I can’t read them all at once, so I’d like to pick your brain to learn more.”

“As if I’d-”

Before the woman can take out her gun to shoot herself, I use my powers to blow away her arms and legs and pin her to the wall. Additionally, my powers suck the air from her lungs so she painfully screams silently so no one outside the room can hear us. They then prick her nerves so she talks to me despite her not wanting to.

“You’re awfully sadistic for a hero,” she says in a dry, horse voice.

“This is merely what you deserve. I don’t do this for my own amusement, despite how I may laugh. Among the prisoners here, you have the highest chance to repent, even though the odds are below one percent in my mind. It’s best to use it wisely to save your soul,” I say.

“Haha! What do I have to repent of? I lived my life the way I wanted to and helped everyone I loved live comfortably and happily. I have no regrets.”

“That’s the shame of it.”

“What is?”

“That you lack a conscience, a burden on your mind that makes you feel guilty for evil deeds such as hurting others to get your way.”

“Look who's talking. Where’s your conscience when you torture and kill people like I do?”

“It’s constantly praying and hoping that people like you change. It regrets when I make a mistake and second-guesses itself when things are uncertain.”

“It sounds like a weak mind. You should’ve been more confident and aware, especially concerning your identity, Timeo Severe. It’s not too hard to find out, particularly for an established group like The White Collars. If you thought it was difficult to find me, what makes you believe it’ll be tough for us to locate the people you care about? Heh, even now they’re being hunted and will soon face our own form of justice.”

“I’m sure they’re safe. We planned for you to go after us.”

“Are you absolutely certain? Others have thought they were safe from us, but when you own the city from top to bottom like we do, there’s nowhere for anyone to hide.”

Looking over to Kane, he says, “You can go check on your family and friends. I’ll stay here to clean up this mess.”

“There’s no need for you to endanger yourself. They’re locked in here-”

The alarms start blaring as the woman says, “Ha! We have backup plans upon backup plans. We’ll win like we always-”

Kane blows the woman’s head to bits and then says, “Go! I’ll handle this. I’m sure you’ll be back here before you know it if it’s all a bluff.”

I nod and go out to the safehouses where my family and friends hide, and sure enough, they’re all being attacked by The White Collars' allies. Raymond, Ralph, Jeph, and Tim are being attacked by their own officers, Lancetto is attacked by his guards, politicians, and businessmen, Klinge is attacked by his workers, and Darcy is attacked by her many contacts. Everyone thought these people who were close to them wouldn’t betray them, and yet, they are either spies for The White Collars or betray us for selling out or being intimidated. Thanks be to God, I rescue all of them without anyone close to me being seriously hurt or killed. With everyone safe, I rush back to Kane, who is steeped in the blood of The White Collars as he rains metal justice from his two pistols on everyone around him.

The superhuman villains and criminals are released from the upper floors to help The White Collars, but I carve through them, dispensing death, even to the corrupt prison guards, wardens, and even janitors who are on the side of the enemy. I trust that he can handle himself, while I ensure no one escapes or catches Kane by surprise, and by the end of it, most everyone in the prison lies dead and in pieces.

As we stand among the carnage we created, Kane smiles and says to me, “Now, this is justice.”

“It is. I think you’re ready to be my permanent ally. I’m sorry that I never asked, but where do you live?” I ask.

“Nowhere. On the streets. I move from place to place, so I can sleep and not get caught off guard by my enemies.”

“How about you stay at my house? I have plenty of room and it’s a safe place to be, or at least it is now.”

“I’d like that. Thank you.”

Later in the day, when things calm down, Raymond and Jeph appear on TV to publicly denounce The White Collars and inform the people of Meridian that they were behind yesterday’s attempt on their lives. While this is happening, the police, superhero, and vigilante associations are raiding The White Collar hideouts, and Kane and I are dealing with the stragglers and traitors who still lie among us. As for the ball of flesh and prison attack, Raymond says they were the work of a dark vigilante, who will be dealt with in due time, meaning he’s going to give me an earful tomorrow and didn’t want to say it was L’Obscurité since I’m a legitimate hero backed by the city and didn’t want to say they backed my extreme actions, though I’m sure there are those in the city who already know I was responsible for what happened, given my reputation. Regardless, I invite him and everyone else over for dinner to celebrate our victory, but Raymond and Ralph decline because they have to clean up the mess I’ve made, like they usually do. There’s going to be a lot of changes in the future to ensure that a group like The White Collars can’t infiltrate and influence Meridian. I’m sure of it.

While my friends and family celebrate our victory, I let Darcy know that “Kane will be staying with us so he doesn’t live on the streets.”

“That’s fine with me. It sounds like you’re adopting him, even though you’re only ten years older than him,” she says.

“It’s weird if you put it like that.”

“Not for me. I need more children. Oh, and Kane, don’t mind the noises you hear in the night. Timeo and I are trying to have around seven children.”

“It’s none of my business,” Kane says while eating.

“But there are situations when I need to be out there fighting crime with him,” I say.

“Kane is supposed to carry on your legacy and give you free time with your family, right?”

Darcy looks at Kane with a threatening smile as if she’ll strangle him if he says no, and he seems to be intimidated by her.

“Yeah. I don’t mind letting you take a break. I’ve been by myself all these years, after all.”

“Come on, you have to have my back here.”

“She’s your wife, and you can’t always say no to her.”

“He can never say no to me, you mean, right?”

“Yeah…sure. Like I said, it’s none of my business.”

“See? I like him already.”

God, please have mercy on me because my wife will not, but thank you again for giving me someone new who will carry on my legacy.

 

The End

First Son of Divine Darkness: Chapter 3 – The Tilting Pitiless Scales of Justice

Chapter 3 – The Tilting Pitiless Scales of Justice

My allies and I gather the information we have after our investigations to see what we can do about The White Collars.

Giving the table to Raymond, he says, “Bastards were able to kill themselves before we arrived, and those that didn’t somehow managed to do it when we locked them up. As for the evidence, someone managed to gain access to the precinct and destroy it. I’m sure it was to send a mocking message to us. I’m going to be lining up every single person in the building at the time for questioning because of how much of a mess this is.”

“Heads are going to roll,” Ralph adds.

“The mayor, Darcy, and I have come up less than short as well. We haven’t heard from some of our contacts and received their body parts in the mail with warnings,” Lancetto explains.

“They did the same thing to my mom,” Kane interjects. “All this effort is useless.”

“I have to agree with the kid,” Klinge admits. “My people can’t get anywhere near the group without risking their lives and the lives of their loved ones. Their homes and property have been vandalized, and they’ve received threatening letters where they work.”

“Tell me you have something, Timeo,” Mayor Jeph says.

“I do. I have names and faces since not all of them used masks during their private meetings, and they trusted in the security and secrecy of their group. Still, it’s nothing we can use to legally put them away because they have contacts within the prison, just in case they want to escape or use it as a pseudo-base of operations.”

“I’m sure you know of a way of getting to them,” Darcy says.

“It’s not one of the more legal-minded among us are going to like. I’m sure they don’t want me to tear the prison apart to find them, along with political and law enforcement offices. They also have contacts in the poor, middle class, and rich areas alike, so the best course of action is to cut off the head of their operations, then kill the pieces of the still squirming body.”

“I don’t like it, but I say you should do what you have to and tell me where you’re going so I can tell my people to look the other way,” Mayor Jeph says.

“I’m glad to see someone in politics is willing to do the right thing,” Kane points out.

“I’ll let you know when that happens. For now, Kane and I will find the center of their operations, and then, we’ll go from there.”

“What do you want the rest of us to do?” Darcy asks.

“Make them think you’re scared and have given up on your pursuit of them. Keep yourselves and your loved ones safe. Let us handle the rest of this,” I say to my friends.

“Are you sure?”

“It’s the right move, Darcy,” Lancetto says. “There’s nothing much else we can do that L’Obscurité can’t do better on his own. We’d just be burdening his mind with worry if we got ourselves in more useless danger.”

Darcy looks at me helplessly and nods her head in acceptance. While my friends arrange plans to keep one another safe, Kane and I leave the meeting to get to work. Outside, a mailman hands me a letter. Strange, it’s morning, and the mail doesn’t come in until the afternoon. Opening the letter, I see the Coronamento Corporation seal at the bottom, a golden crown, along with an address.

“They could be working with The White Collars. We may have been found out,” I say.

“So what? Even if we go to that address, they can’t harm you. You’re invincible,” Kane says.

“Yes, but you aren’t, nor are my friends.”

“Don’t worry about me. I’m willing to die if it means bringing these criminals to justice. Let’s go there together and see what they want.”

“Alright, but be prepared for the worst.”

“I always am.”

Kane and I go to a construction site that Coronamento owns and is working on. Today, it’s eerily quiet with not a person in sight. We go into the only building that’s completely built and see if anyone is there. Inside the building, we find two managers standing near a large TV screen. Looking into their memories, I see that they’re the people waiting for us, and the screen is meant to be a way for Giovanni Coronamento to talk to us. They’re a bit nervous since they know about my powers, but they also don’t seem to have bad intentions for us, and just want to help us for mutual reasons. For these reasons, I manifest Kane and myself in the room, which they expected to happen, and try not to be too startled by it.

“Mr. Severe, we’re glad that you accepted our request to see you. Our boss would like to talk to you, but I’m sure you already know that,” one of them says before turning on the TV.

Soon after, Giovanni Coronamento appears on TV. He’s a well-dressed man with slicked back hair, green eyes, and an always confident face as if he has the world in his hands.

“Mr. Severe, or should I call you L’Obscurité? You can transform back into your normal self here. We know who you are, and I have this place watched by my men,” Giovanni says.

Kane and I look at each other, and he nods to me to let me decide for myself since he doesn’t know if I should trust him or not. I transform into my normal self as a courtesy.

“Thank you. Ah, I see that you like to dress up in a suit and tie like me, no matter the occasion.”

I smile and say, “I do run my family’s business and have to keep up a good public image, after all.”

“That’s true. Given your powers, I had to meet and talk to you like this, but don’t think that I have bad intentions for your friends and you. I want to work together to get rid of The White Collars or at least cripple their operations here. My motive for doing so? I’m trying to build a busy in your city, and it’s in our shared interest. Boys, you can hand him the USBs.”

The two men give me two USB drives.

“What are on these? Information about The White Collars?”

“That and some of my own secrets that I’m willing to give as a show of trust. I want us to work together in the future. You’re on my list of superhumans that can seriously damage my company, so I don’t want to get on your bad side at all.”

“Giving me a list of secrets you’re comfortable with me knowing isn’t much of an olive branch.”

“You’ve seen me on TV or the internet and must know about me. We share the same faith, so there’s no reason for us to fight and all the reasons to work together for the same goals, making the world a better place.”

“I’m more of a smaller-scale kind of man. My city is the only thing that I need to change and protect right now.”

“Understandable, but you’ll come to find that the larger world will influence Meridian and you’ll have to move out of your comfort zone sooner or later.”

“I’ll consider it when the time comes.”

“Of course. Again, thank you for the chat, and happy hunting. I hope we can work together again soon and see each other in person in the future.”

The TV turns off by itself, and Giovanni’s men thank me as well before leaving. Kane and I bring and go through the information we have. At first, they’re surprised to see us back so soon and the reason for doing so, and even more surprised by what’s on the USBs.

“So, there’s really no by-the-book way to get this done,” Raymond says while rubbing the sides of his head.

Jeph says, “Timeo, look, if you’re going to do anything, we’ll-”

“Are we really going to do this? Giovanni wants us to be as alegal as he is, either by allying with him, acting completely above the law, or both. He benefits in all scenarios,” Raymond points out.

“What’s the point if the law is upheld if The White Collars keep getting away with the vile things they do daily in our city, in our home? Exceptions should be made in scenarios like this.”

“I feel like I’m always hearing that. I want to know where the line is drawn, so the city doesn’t erupt in chaos if they have a problem with the law in way or another.”

“The line is drawn here,” I interrupt. “When they cut off every chance to legally put them away. When they torch evidence, and threaten, bribe, and kill people to hide what they’ve done, and then use every underhanded ‘legal’ method to get away with crime when convicted, including using prison as a pseudo-shelter. Giovanni may be suspect, but he’s honest, and he's shown us much of his inner workings and plans for Meridian and the world with the files he’s given us. I don’t see a good reason why we can’t keep him at arm's length so we can benefit from a partnership with him, while also keeping a close eye on his activities.”

“Alright, alright, fine. Just keep me in the loop about what is happening, and try not to get too messy with what you’re doing,” Raymond says.

“Thank you, chief.”

Kane and I leave once more, while everyone discusses the information found and what they can do to help. We head out to a place that Giovanni gave us, which is said to have the people who know where the center of The White Collar’s operations is. His people have only gotten this far in getting the information about since they’re still new to this area and don’t have enough resources or people to pursue them further, and The White Collars kept delaying his efforts to do so through their usual methods. This area of Meridian houses the rich and upper-middle class of the city. If you were new to the area and didn’t know anything about it, you’d think it wasn’t connected to the city at all because of the low crime compared to the city and being a self-sustaining area that keeps to itself. Some people in the suburbs even denounce being part of the city and view people there as living dangerously, while those in the city view the people in the suburbs as soft, overly-rich losers.

The houses are in an old Americana style that gives off the feeling of old American values and living the American dream. Taking Kane around the area, we investigate the addresses and businesses we were given and find our targets. They may seem like normal people farming, doing arts, and spending time in the community, but I see their sins as clear as day. Some pretend to be working for the poor while living in luxury and doing the bare minimum to prove it. They told their people in the city that they are traveling to gain more money and support as they relax and live the good life out here.

Before we begin our assault, I tell Kane, “No, killing, just like last time.”

“Again? Even here, where we see the worst of the worst out here of all places?” Kane asks.

“I’ll need them alive for what I’m planning.”

Seeing the grin on my transformed face stops Kane from saying anything else. He smiles as if knowing exactly what I’m going to do. First, I transform into a familiar face for each of them so that they listen to me and gather in one specific place for an “emergency meeting”. Second, once everyone is in one place by the town square, I enact my devious plan. All the operatives of The White Collars see that their flesh stretching towards one another, and soon enough, they become a large ball of still living, mangled bodies. The sight and screams of pain get the attention of the people of the town, who either flee in terror or look at it in stunned morbid amazement.

I laugh loud enough for everyone to hear and manifest myself in my full transformed state in front of them. “Behold, these are some of the most powerful men and women in Meridian who pull its strings to suit their favor. They do not care who they hurt or kill as long as they get what they want. You may think you know them or that their motives are just, but they hide behind a shroud of compassion and friendship and deserve their fate!”

The ball of flesh starts rolling towards the city. As it rolls, tendril-like arms stretch out from it to ensnare others along the way who deserve the same fate, such as associates of The White Gloves, non-associated criminals, and those who knowingly profited from The White Gloves, but never shunned what they received or denounced them for their methods. When we’re far away from sight, I bring Kane to the top of the ball and then call Raymond to let him know what’s happening. Funnily enough, he acknowledges it and then hangs up. Soon after, Darcy calls me.

“Everything is set up and we’re all safe, my love. I see what is happening through what my people are showing me, and it is beautifully morbid. A true work of art,” Darcy says.

“This piece isn’t finished yet, but will be once it’s in the city. With all eyes on it, I’ll cripple The White Gloves since I know where their leaders are hiding,” I say.

“I look forward to it.”

After hanging up, Kane says to me, “I didn’t expect this, but I’m pleasantly surprised by it.”

“I’m glad you are. As you can see, there are worse fates than death that can serve our purposes more than if we just killed them. This ball of filth will act as a distraction while we go to the prison.”

“That’s where their leaders are? It’s a sly idea.”

“It is. I was surprised to see it in the memories of these people, but at the same time, it does make a lot of sense for an influential and powerful group of people to hide in. It’s not enough to have people and influence in government, police, business, and all classes of society. If you own and run the prisons, you can use them as recruiting grounds, private meeting areas, and safe havens where law-abiding officers, heroes, and vigilantes can’t prove you’re breaking the law if you’re in a place where the law can’t really punish you further.”

“What about us? What are we going to do?”

“I said the law can’t punish them further, but we can. Now will be the time to take justice into our own hands for the sake of Meridian and her people. Oh, and given the people we’ll be facing, you don’t have to show mercy. Spare no one.”

Kane laughs along with me and says, “It’s judgment day, baby.”

Monday, May 26, 2025

First Son of the Divine Darkness: Chapter 2 – Restraining Anger

Chapter 2 – Restraining Anger

Kane meets me and the allies I have in the city, first thing in the morning at my house. He meets us for breakfast and seems put off by how casual we all are.

“Relax, eat, and take your hood off. You’re among friends,” I say.

Kane takes his hood off and says, “There are a lot of important people here. Are you sure we aren’t going to be found out or spied upon?”

“I have that covered. My people watch the streets leading up to the house so I always know what is happening around here,” Darcy says. “No one goes near anyone I love without me knowing about it.”

“You’re the artistic wife of the dark hero, right? Given that you have eyes and ears everywhere, I assume you knew that I was going to approach your husband to ask to be a hero like him, and the first target I want us to go after?”

“I knew every detail of it, but didn’t interfere. You remind me a lot of my husband in his early years of crime-fighting, so I thought taking on an apprentice would help him further build his legacy and give him more time to spend at home with the kids and me.”

Looking over at my two infant children, my boy, Gris, and daughter, Rouge, they look at Kane with curiosity, who gives them a gentle smile.

“I see. I’ll be sure to keep him safe and be worthy enough to fight crime in his place if he ever needs to be with you.”

“You’re the one who needs to be kept safe. Timeo doesn’t need to worry about anything,” Chief Raymond comments from his side of the table.

“That’s true. I was merely giving a thoughtful reassurance. As for you, chief, you have a lot of corrupt cops to worry about in the city. Do you sleep well at night, living with the fact that you’ve protected and worked with people who are worse scum than the ones you put behind bars?”

“The same way you do. We both have innocent blood on our hands for our inactions and actions. Watch your tone with me because I’ll put you behind bars again if you give me a good excuse, kid.”

“That’s right. Don’t mess with the chief,” Chief Assistant Ralph adds.

“I’d be nicer to him, if I were you,” Lancetto says. “We all work together for the common goal of making Meridian a better place to live, free of evil and crime.”

“I’ll try to be, but tell me how you can avoid corrupting influences despite having influence in areas of business, politics, and religion?”

“Because my parents raised me right in the faith and my brother, Timeo.”

“Brother? I thought all his family was dead?”

“It’s a brotherly bond stronger than blood,” I clarify.

“Yes, and when his siblings weren’t there for him, I was. We’ve been brothers since we were kids.”

“I see. What about you, Mr. Mayor? I’m surprised to see you and your deputy here.”

“Believe it or not, I’m willing to allow you and other heroes and vigilantes to overstep the law if it means real justice is enforced. I’ll be the first to admit that the law is flawed and needs work, since doing what’s right and what the law allows aren’t always in sync,” Mayor Jeph says.

“Also, just because we’re on your side, doesn’t mean you can break every law and cause chaos to bring criminals to justice. We can only help you so much,” Deputy Tim adds.

“I’ll keep that in mind.”

Everyone looks over to Klinge and expects Kane to say something to him. The mutated man doesn’t seem to have paid attention to what was being said as he was eating, and seeing that he has all eyes on him, he looks at everyone and stops.

“What?” Klinge says.

“I won’t say anything to him. He’s cool in my book since his businesses focus on the people,” Kane says.

“Haha, you’re making all kinds of friends today, aren’t you?” I say.

After finishing with those pleasantries and introductions, we get our meeting started by bringing to the table the latest group of villains we’re going after.

“The White Collars are a known, and yet, secretive group that is harder to root out than the weakness of sin within men. What do you know about them?” I say.

“I thought they were just a rumor, but it turns out, I’ve been putting away, killing, and firing their men for years,” Raymond says.

“I’ve been trying to pull up cases and information relating to them, however, they’ve either been deleted or tampered with,” Ralph says.

“Unfortunately, the same has been happening on our side. I’ve tried to ask around and get more information, but they’ve been doing their best to avoid me,” Jeph admits.

“We’ve been coming up empty. These people burn every scrap of evidence against them or the people associated with them,” Tim says.

“I told you this would happen,” Kane says to me.

“I’ve come up with a bit more than they did,” Lancetto says. “I know that they have white strips on the tips of their collars. They hid it with pieces of thin cloth tape, and it’s a sort of access pass to their meetings and clubs.”

“Okay, and? Do you know the locations of those clubs and meeting locations?”

“I do, thanks to the help of Darcy informants.”

Turning to Darcy, Kane says, “You sound like the most well-connected person in this room, despite being a simple woman of the arts.”

“The arts connect all people, so of course, I have eyes and ears everywhere,” Darcy says with a sly smile. “I’ve written down all the locations for you to investigate. As for the rest of us, we’ll be further investigating The White Collars to see how we can better bring them to justice.”

“This sounds like regular alegal work. I’m surprised there isn’t a person who works with the Coronamento Corporation here,” Kane comments while we look at the list of locations.

“They’ve offered us many partnerships before, but I don’t trust them very much. Giovanni Coronamento is a bit too overactive in creating his own army of superhumans and making friends in all corners of the world to shape the world’s laws as he sees fit,” I say.

“They’re also trying to make their mark in the Meridian and act as if they’re just here to help. The workers there get good benefits, pay, and superhuman injections to do their job better, but it’s all very suspect,” Klinge says.

“We’ll get to them when they prove to be an active threat. So far, he seems to be doing everything for righteous reasons. In the meantime, let’s deal with The White Collars. Maybe we’ll even find a connection between the groups. It wouldn’t surprise me, at this point,” Lancetto says.

With our roles and assignments clear and understood, we go out to fulfill them. I kiss my wife and kids and hug my brother before Kane and I leave to do our part.

“Make sure the guy doesn’t get himself in trouble,” Lancetto says.

“He’ll do fine. Trust me,” Darcy comments.

“You’re just saying that because he’s a lot like the kind of people you inspired when you were our first threat.”

“Maybe.”

“She was one of your first foes?” Kane asks me.

“She was. She repented much and was inspired by my actions, like you did,” I say. “That’s a story we’ll tell you another time. For now, let’s get today’s work done. You have a lot of practice to go through.”

I take Kane, and we become one with the shadows and light to travel at the speed of light through the city to one of our first locations. It’s a largely abandoned shopping area that sits between the poor and middle-class areas of the city. It was once one of the best places to be when malls were a big thing, but it has fallen into a steady decline, with few stores and restaurants still operating in it.

Explaining further my plan, I say, “I’ll let you do your work, while supporting you where I can with minimal use of my powers. If you want to be a hero like me, then you’re going to need to do a lot of work to earn it.”

“I won’t let you down,” Kane says.

I manifest my dark powers, shroud my appearance, and take out my pistol.

“Let’s get to work then, shall we?”

The criminals we are after go about their business, selling drugs, putting desperate people into debt, and people selling themselves for less than their worth, without knowing of our presence. I scout the area so we have an idea of where everyone is, and I look into the memories of many of the people. Since neither Kane nor I has silencers on our handguns and I want Kane to mostly handle this, I laugh to get the attention of everyone in the area.

“The time of judgment is at hand! Whoever has information on The White Collars should immediately surrender and turn yourselves in, or you’ll face a quick death,” I say, and then laugh again.

Distracted by my voice, some of the people realize that it’s me, L’Obscurité, who is threatening them, so they immediately surrender, despite knowing nothing. Others refuse to give in and attempt to escape, only to be met with a hail of gunfire from Kane. Cutting my way through, I head to the other side of the mall, disguised as one of the criminals. In their panic, they trust my words and follow me, only to discover they have been lured into a room they believed led outside, which is instead a chamber covered in living flesh that manifests the consequences of their sins. Some confront family members and innocents they have killed or harmed, while others find themselves ensnared in barbed wire, which crushes them into a ball without killing them.

Going out into the mall area where the rest of the people are trapped, I use my pistol to eliminate the rest of the criminals who refuse to surrender and don’t get any special nightmarish penance to endure. As we’re clearing out the area, Kane starts shooting some of the people who have surrendered.

I immediately go to him, push his hands away, so he doesn’t kill anyone else, and then say, “Hold your fire! They surrendered!”

“They deserve to die! I see it and I know you do too!” Kane says.

“Did you already forget what I told you? We all do, but that doesn’t mean it can’t change.”

Looking over at the surrendering criminals, I see that Kane knows they’re meant to be spared now.

“Okay, fine. That was my bad. I’ll try to be better next time.”

Trusting in Kane, we go to the next few locations to get more information and evidence against The White Collars. There were a few times Kane loses himself, sometimes it’s forgivable given the scum we face, other times he executes those who have a sliver of hope remaining in them. After each encounter, I call Raymond to clean up the scene, arrest the people who remain, and archive the evidence there. We work until nighttime, and before we eat dinner at my house, I talk to him in private in my room.

“What? Did I mess up that badly?” he asks.

“In a way, you did,” I admit. “Every lost soul is a tragedy since they are lost forever. I see that the biggest problem you have to overcome is self-control. Just because you see that someone deserves to die or you think they should, doesn’t mean that you should just act on it.”

“Why not? It’s God’s judgment, not mine.”

“But you’ve seen it change.”

“And they can change back and go from deserving mercy to death. I don’t think you know how I see the world. Simply by glancing at people, I can tell if they deserve to die or not, and this applies to more than just criminals. Everyone I encounter is judged in my eyes, and my hands twitch to enforce justice upon all those who deserve death, including the parents who corrupt their children with their false ideologies and gods, and the addicts who ruin their lives and others’ lives to satisfy their desires for drugs, alcohol, money, or sex.”

“You’re right. I can’t see into people’s memories and souls without using my powers, but I can see further into people than you can, and I looked at every person we brought to justice today. Some deserved immediate death, others deserved mercy, and few went from deserving death to mercy. We can’t just immediately act on instinct and pull the trigger on these people, even though they deserve it. Tomorrow, I want you to exclusively use your revolvers, despite what you see in people.”

“What about those deserving death? Are you putting yourself above God’s will?”

“Not at all. Trust me on this. If someone is beyond help, I’ll handle it. I simply want you to practice mercy.”

Kane sighs and sits down on one of the chairs in my room.

“If you say so. I am learning from you after all, so why should the student dictate what lesson the teacher gives? Can I just say one last thing?”

“I’ll never criticize you for speaking your mind, so go ahead.”

“You may be able to see the light at the end of the tunnel in the darkness of reality, but I don’t. The world will never change in our favor for long, so we have to make as permanent a mark as we can through aggression and force. We can’t play nice and politics with it because it hates us, wants us dead, and everything we believe and love burned to ashes, defiled, and mocked.”

“I know that. It’s why I want you and everyone else I inspire to be my legacy. I want you moving forward with the right mindset and doing things the right way, so you don’t make the same mistakes I have. You’re a good man, Kane, but you need work, just like everyone else.”

“Yeah, I know.”

I hold out my hand with a smile and hug Kane when he shakes it. We then eat dinner with my family and end the day, better understanding each other and our enemy. Kane does have a point, and I feel as if he’s right, given the memories I’ve seen.

Saturday, May 24, 2025

First Son of Divine Darkness: Chapter 1 – First Apprentice


Chapter 1 – First Apprentice

My life isn’t all crime-fighting. I’m a father, husband, and inheritor of my family’s legacy. I help run the schools, charities, and hospitals that we own in Meridian and frequently visit them to ensure they are running well and that their concerns are heard. I’ll even help out with whatever they need on any given day, just like my parents did. Even though I don’t practice medicine like they did, I’m still able to run around hospitals, giving people what they need, and help teach at schools, and serve at community centers that feed and give to the poor.

Today, I’m assisting the Knights’ council, which my father and past generations of men built to serve our parish community, its families, and the city's poor. We’ve already prepared and distributed meals to those in need and are cleaning up our hall before decorating it for a school event. Suddenly, a group of armed, masked men kick in the doors of the hall and reveal their intentions by threatening to shoot us unless we hand over our money. Just as we’re about to give them a warm, Meridian City-style no by pulling out our guns to shoot them, a third party intervenes. A man clad in a black and red hood, black gloves, black pants and boots, and a white shirt with a snake resembling the chi rho symbol bursts in, guns blazing, taking out some of the criminals with his revolver while targeting others exclusively with his pistol.

The guys and I keep our guns trained on this mysterious man, thank him for saving us, and ask him what he wants. The man with the red hood makes his guns disappear into thin air as he raises his hands with a smile.

“I came here simply to help you, dark hero,” he says while looking directly at me.

Knowing what he’s talking about, I tell my friends that he’s trustworthy and that I need to talk to him in private, and despite not knowing what he’s talking about, they trust me.

Bringing him over to a room where my friends won’t hear us, I ask, “Why did you seek me out?”

“I want to learn from you, L’Obscurité. I want to be a hero like you are. Have I not proved my dedication by finding out your true identity and saving you from criminals?” he says.

“Finding my true identity is not unique, and what you’ve done is just the first step in impressing me.” I look into the man’s eyes to see the quality of his soul and into his memories for the truth of his intentions. “You seem to be honest, Kane Mundr. Let’s put in some honest work before we get to the real work and take off your hood. You’re among friends here.”

Accepting my request, Kane takes off his hood to reveal a young face with slicked-back black hair. His right eye is light blue and grey, while his left eye is red and black, and both look like the eyes of a snake. My friends don’t question Kane helping us clean up, and I call my friend, the Chief of Police Raymond Ellory, to clean up the remains of the criminals and ignore Kane.

“Kane Mundr was there to ‘save’ you from criminals?” Raymond asks. “He was the villain known as The Guillotine. You put him away in the first few years of your hero work for attempted murder. I think he was going after certain politicians for whatever self-righteous reason.”

“I’ve seen his memories, and he looks to be a genuinely repentant soul. It’s what my powers are supposed to do, so I trust him,” I say.

“I won’t doubt you and your powers. Just be careful, okay, kid?”

“I’ll keep you updated as always, chief.”

After cleaning up, Kane and I take a walk through the busy streets of Meridian.

“That was the Chief of Police on the phone, right?” Kane asks.

“Right. He’s why the police didn’t question you much when they arrived. Back in the day, he would’ve had you sign a contract before doing anything with me,” I say.

“He won’t be much help for the villain I have in mind for us to go after.”

“I need to see you in action again before I think we should work together. There’s work to be done, lives to be saved, and criminals to be punished, after all.”

“Okay…Even though I thought I did enough to impress you, I won’t argue.”

Leading Kane to areas of crime by transforming into my dark hero, L’Obscurité, form, and transporting us instantly. I watch as he shoots criminals with either his revolver or pistol, and question him on it and his particular powers.

“After your powers touched and brought me to repentance, I was able to see if a person should continue living or die. The revolver shoots them with a pellet that injects a substance into people that knocks them out for a day, while my pistol shoots them with bullets that have lethal poisons in them,” Kane explains.

I check for a pulse in the criminals he shot with his revolvers and look into the souls of everyone he shot, and find that he’s telling the truth.

“Fascinating. Let’s continue cleaning up the city,” I say.

“Sure, but can I point out the people who do daylight crime despite the presence of you and other heroes and vigilantes? People aren’t just desperate, stupid, or greedy to do this kind of crime.”

“I know some have connections in legitimate businesses, the government, and law enforcement, both the police and the hero associations. Those kinds of criminals are harder to root out legitimately.”

“Not for a hero like you. You rooted out plenty of them and hung them from a building they were doing business in on the first day you revealed yourself to the public, remember?”

“I remember, but I’m also not as extreme as I was in my earlier years.”

Saying that makes me feel old, even though I’m thirty-two years old.

“So, what? You’ve gone soft now? It doesn’t look like it from what I’ve heard.”

“I’ll explain more after we’ve punished more evil.”

I lead Kane through various parts of the city and watch him effectively clear out entire buildings, warehouses, and streets of crime. We also stop robberies and extortions in between his clearing of areas. He doesn’t seem to be invincible like me, as he actively tries to avoid bullets, and is good at doing so, as he dodges and dances between them at superhuman speeds.

“You can’t take a bullet, can you?” I ask.

“I have tougher skin than most, but no, I cannot, unlike you,” Kane says while pointing at the gun wound in my forehead. “I have to say, I like your new appearance, and that bullet in your head makes you look tougher and scarier. It was your encounter with your brother that convinced me that Timeo Severe and L’Obscurité were the same person. I’m sorry about what happened then.”

“I try not to think about that, despite my parents and siblings all dying in one night. Still, I keep this bullet in my head as part of my appearance as a reminder of that somber day. As for the rest of it, the long hat, the coat of darkness, and the scarf that’s now lower to show the terrifying face behind it, it’s all a result of my growth in power and inspired by the Divinity who gave it to me.”

“How come you aren’t using it to its fullest potential? Why hold back and not let justice flood the city?”

“It inspires the wrong kinds of people and gives them the wrong message. Besides, God gave me my powers, and what happens to those touched by it is decided by Him, not me. I am merely a conduit for His will. The most I can do to influence what happens is by praying for those affected by it to increase their chance at repentance and receiving mercy.”

“Really? All that praying must be working out if you’ve spared more people than killed in recent years. Even so, I know that you know more deserves death than mercy.”

“All of us deserve death instead of mercy. Watch me work and I’ll explain more.”

Taking Kane to another location, I handle the criminals by allowing my dark powers of justice to execute their will upon them. From the shadows, he watches as people are torn to shreds, shot o pieces, stabbed to death by drug needles, beaten to a pulp by the demons that controlled their desires, and other such horrible fates that somehow left them living despite appearing to have gone through an experience that would’ve killed them. For the last criminal, I reach down their throat and tear out their heart, which is a filthy thing with mouths that have sharp teeth in them.

“If you can stand this being in your body and repent, then you’ll live,” I say to the criminal before shoving their heart back down their throat and leaving them to be challenged for their salvation.

I then take Kane out of the area so we can talk.

“What did you notice back there?” I ask him.

“A lot of those people were destined to die, but your prayers and powers gave them more time,” he says.

“Correct. A repentant soul is more likely to never sin again and tell others to do the same.”

“Tch. ‘More likely. ’ The worst of them is more likely to fall back into their old habits.”

“We all do, some of us worse than others, but that doesn’t mean we don’t get another second chance. Remember what happened to you and let that humble you. If you follow me, you’ll find that you’ll be sparing more people than killing and want to spare.”

“You may have a better view of things because you see into people’s souls and memories, but you have to admit that there’s a time when justice needs to be given more than mercy.”

“I know that. Tell me the reason for all of your righteous anger.”

“Can’t you just see them in my memories?”

“I want to hear you tell it to me.”

“My dad was one of the rare honest politicians who never took a bribe from anyone or picked a political side. He just did what he thought was right for the city and damn the consequences for doing so. Well, that attitude got him killed. The people that we’re after staged an accident with AI-driven cars so that he would stop giving them a hard time.”

“That’s what turned you to a life of crime?”

"I admit that I regret my earlier years. I hurt a lot of innocent people who probably didn’t deserve it or knew what was going on to figure out what happened, but there’s no time to regret the past. We have to fix this situation in the present. My mom was so devastated by my dad’s death and what I had become that she had to risk her life to bring my dad’s killers to justice. She contacted my dad’s friends in business and the government, but they sold her out, leaving me clueless about where they took her. All I got was a finger, a toe, and a necklace that I got her for a birthday, along with a note mocking me for my efforts to get back at them and telling me to stop."

“They don’t all deserve to die, and criminals get too greedy or over their heads because they think they have all angles perfectly covered at all times.”

These people may slip up, but they maintain a seemingly endless array of contingency plans for failure. They have friends at all levels of power who can eliminate evidence or manipulate it so they can imprison people they dislike. If that approach fails, they have judges and lawyers who can minimize punishments or extricate them from the situation entirely, such as when they hired a villain to break into a courtroom to stage a fake assassination attempt, had a hero fight and imprison them, merely to create an excuse to keep their ally in protective custody where they enjoy a luxurious prison cell from which they continue to operate.

“I think I know who you’re talking about. They don’t have a name for their group, despite being a collective, but they are known as The White Collars by those who do business with them. I’m pretty sure I’ve done damage to their organization in one way or another, but nothing substantial yet.”

“Why not make them your next target, then? The longer we let them operate as they are, the more people they hurt and kill. Haven’t you seen and heard enough yet to trust me? Is this too big of a challenge for the great, L’Obscurité?”

I consider it for a few seconds in prayer before answering, “Alright. The darkness of justice will fall upon The White Collars through you and me.”

I manifest a dark hand that has a hole in it, similar to the wounds of my God. Kane smiles as he shakes my hand.

“Let’s kick ass, partner,” he says.