Two Choice and Consequence stories out!

Choice and Consequence: The Original Thrillers is out on Amazon in print ($16) and eBook ($7) format. This story contains the first five stories in the Choice and Consequence stories that were first supposed to be video games and are now books. This also contains all the extras that came with each story.

I've put some of your reviews on the back of the book with sources so if you put your name with your review, your name is in the back of the book.
Choice and Consequence of Being a Dumbass is going to be published very soon so I'll post here when it's available in eBook and print.

Choice and Consequence of Avoiding Punishment

Running away from his home country of Britain, Nevan is on his way to the Thirteen Colonies to hide from what he’s done. He stole a boat that is carrying food, water, and various other supplies like clothes, building tools, and some weapons. The authorities don’t actually know that he’s responsible for the crimes he’s done so this is just to make double sure that Nevan escapes capital punishment. Nevan makes sure to hit uninhabited land and once he gets there, he breathes a sigh of relief and laughs at the sky. The land he’s hit is close to an island and has hills around it. It’s a very grassy area that fertile enough to bear crops to which Nevan starts planting. He builds his own small house and drinks a few beers to celebrate his freedom. There’s no one and nothing here to tell him what to do and Nevan can live his life this way until he dies.

He falls asleep in the mid-afternoon because of his one-man party and dreams of jailers that look like reapers cloaked in chains. They ride on decayed horses that gallop across the still water with scythes in their hands and cuffs at the ready. Nevan quickly takes the guns he has and uses them all on the approaching reapers, but none of the guns do anything to them. Since they’re approaching at a speed that’s too fast to run from, Nevan stands his ground with a falchion sword. The reapers land on shore and despite Nevan’s sly skills, he gets caught by their chains and dragged back the way he came. He’s skipped along the water, but is never put under. Only when he manages to get free from his chains does he dive into the ocean. A shark comes his way to eat its next meal, but with his falchion sword still in hand, he cuts the shark enough to make it retreat. Nevan surfaces and sees that he’s miles away from shore. He still tries to swim to shore while the icy cold sea slowly saps his energy. As he keeps swimming, he feels something pull at him until something does pull him down into the sea. It’s a mermaid creature that gives him a kiss which makes him drown faster. Nevan quickly cuts the mermaid in half along with the others that come after him. Icy cold and thin hand form in the ocean then pull him down into its deep and dark depths until he faints from lack of oxygen.

Flashes of his memory go through his mind with various voices.

“We should’ve never had that trouble making boy!”

“What have you been doing young man?! Don’t you know how this makes your family look?!”

“That girl is such an ugly runt. You should have higher, richer standards!”

“I should just kill them all. All of my problems would go away if I did.”

“It has to be secret so no one sees it and no one suspects they’re gone.”

“I’ve done it! Their bodies are mush and everyone thinks it was an accident!”

Nevan wakes up on the shore with his falchion all well and good for the most part. He drinks some alcohol and makes a fire to warm himself up. The event that had just taken place is strange to Nevan, but he thinks nothing of it since he can’t explain it.

During the next morning, he sees that the seeds he planted have been eaten by birds. His next option is to go fishing and once he gets a fish, he cuts it open and only finds maggots that eat its insides. This happens with every single fish so he moves to the food that’s on his boat. This food has along been touched and eaten by cat-sized rats that run out of the boat as soon as he opens the food crates. With no food, he checks his water and sees that it looks like puke, it even tastes like it. At least he still has his alcohol, which he drinks until midafternoon.

As the sunsets, he remembers what happens last time and his drunkenness miraculously disappears. Insects crawl out of the earth and move directly towards Nevan. He lights several fires to try to burn them away, but they just charge in while on fire. This has a chain reaction effect and lights all of the bugs on fire which creates a great fire that one would see in Hell. Nevan flees on a rowboat that’s attached to the main one and still, the insects still follow him on the ocean floor while still on fire. They piled on top of each other and set the boat on fire which forces Nevan to jump off. Because of the seemingly infinite legion of insects on fire, the ocean is warmer but still deadly nonetheless. The insects on fire cook the water and cook Nevan’s skin as a result. The more insects that light on fire, the hotter the water gets, and because they’re blocking the shore, there’s nowhere to go, and Nevan blacks out at sea as a result.

Voices of the past ring through his head yet again.

“She wasn’t worth it in the end though everyone will not know how she died and even fewer who know that she was expecting.”

“I haven’t got a job and yet, I’m one of the wealthiest people on the block. A lot of thievery and cut-throat work does that. Oh what a great life it is!”

“By what authority do other people tell me what to do? They’re nothing but other human beings that haven’t found the best way to live like I have!”

“I’ve been hearing whispers that might have to do with me. This place never truly mattered to me so I’ll leave it late at night and I’ll be getting away from all the filth of humanity and any possibility of their judgment. I’m one of the luckiest men alive so this’ll work out perfectly! They’ll tell stories of what they don’t know to be me and I’ll be a legend!”

Nevan wakes up on the shore and a thunderstorm is over him. It pours rain, a heavy wind blows, and lightning lights up the sky so often it might as well be a daytime. Worst of all, Nevan’s alcohol is gone, taken by the wind. Filled with rage, he makes his way to the hills while fighting against the harsh weather.

Once he gets to the top, he screams to the skies, “I AM GOD HERE!”

Directly after, he gets hit by a bolt of lightning right in his eyes. Everything around him becomes completely white. He here’s a muffled voice. The words barely get through to him and he can’t understand why until a gentle pair of hands take his hands away from his ears. Naven looks up to see who it is and only sees a smiling face that shines brighter than the sun.

The man speaks to him, “Do you truly wish to be god of this place?”

“I…I don’t know what I want now,” Nevan responds.

“I can give you a purpose. You only need to take my hand and leave yourself behind. You can have the land, but you have to take care of it.”

“…I…ok…”

The man backs away and holds out his hands for Nevan to take. Nevan, however, finds it hard to move and needs to quite literally break through his out of his own body to take the man’s hands. Once Nevan blinks, he sees that he’s back in The United Kingdom with a deal in his hand to purchase land in the colonies. He has a new ship behind him with a crew of people who appear to be like the man with a shining face. The clothes he’s wearing are different now and is elegant and aristocratic.

A stranger approaches him and asks, “You’re Nevan right?”

“Yes-yes, I am. Who told you?”

“A strange man whose face was awfully bright. Now I see that you have the proper paperwork to colonize the New World’s land so…shall we be off with your crew? I’d like to see the land you’ve acquired.”

“Oh, of course!”

Nevan, his mysterious new and cheerful crew, and the man travel back to where Nevan first landed.

Once they get there and set down on land, the man asks Nevan, “So what are you going to call this place?”

“I…I’m going to call it…Hillside City.”

For the rest of his life, Nevan dedicates his life to building this city. The man with a shining face occasionally gives him advice as what to do and Nevan morally and financially helps tons of people that are like him or in great need. Every now and then, Nevan falls to his old ways and blood gets soaked into the foundation of the city. Nevertheless, he’s successful in creating a great city and helping others despite his previous personality and crimes. It’s a miracle that someone like him changed for the better.

Everything wrong with Sword Art Online

Here's my little collection of everything that's wrong with Sword Art Online. This is an ongoing project so this list of things will constantly be updated when things are discovered and as long as the series goes. I have a hate-love relationship with this series because it's interesting how bad it is and how so many people like it. There's a part of me that really wants to like this series and there's another part that just wants that part completely thrown away. Read my book Trapped Body and Soul in a Video Game to see what I want to see the series look like (it's currently my best-selling book! A sequel will also be in the works modeled after the Phantom Bullet arc).
Each of the problems of the series will be organized by arc or if it's a continuing problem, it'll have its own section.
*This will be continued and updated on its on separate page that you can find on the right.

Continuing Problems:

• Kirito, the main character, is always a shonen, stereotypical, ladies man-character who seems incapable of losing.
• Klein and Agil are two male characters that don't have any real significance in the story even though they seem like they should.
• Every other female character who isn't Asuna has the personality of a shallow pond and they all fond over Kirito. Asuna's character is also held back because of Kirito.
• The show tries not to be a harem even though it is.
• Even though the novels do add small details that make the series better, they're negligible and don't matter to the overall problem.
• Video games are taken way too seriously than in real life.
• Kirito is not the Black Swordsman, Guts from the Berserk series is the real Black Swordsman.

1st Arc - Aincrad

• Kayaba Akihiko forgets why he started the death game and just talks about wanting to make a fantasy land with a floating castle that he could control...for no reason.
• The in video game story isn't really fleshed out.
• Kirito wills himself back to life during the fight with Kayaba.
• Asuna dies, but not really.
• One of the reasons Kirito is the best player in the game because he's a solo player, but he's not as shown by the story.
• Yui is a one off plot device that's obviously not needed since she wasn't included until the second volume of the book series.
• The inclusion of Silica and Lisbeth is unnecessary as they're just additions later added in the second volume of the book series.
• Sachi and her guild's death could've been taken out without hurting the story.
• Klein and Agil are unnecessary though they should've played a larger role. Klein would be Kirito's best friend who also finds love and Agil would be Kirito's merchant, insider to current events, and supporting friend.
• Laughing Coffin is supposed to be this big villain guild, but rarely shows up.
• The only way Kayaba wins in his first fight against Kirito is by cheating.
• The trapped players stayed in the game for years and after they come out, there's no real reason as to how they survived that long and not really handicapped by the long years in the game. A simple reason such as future medical technology would've sufficed for this, but none is given.
• The parody version has more character than this. It's also better.

2nd Arc - Fairy Dance

• Leafa, Kirito's sister, is only given a minor role in this arc which could be easily taken out. The incestial relationship is also unnecessary.
• Sugou Nobuyuki is a bland one dimensional villain like Kayaba.
• None of the in game story is explored. Not even between fairy races.
• The race Kirito picks a race of fairy that's at a disadvantage to the others, but he makes it works.
• Kirito carries everything over from Aincrad so he doesn't have to work for anything. Because of this, he could've gotten to the end with a little help in the first volume.
• Yui is somehow carried over.
• Asuna is nothing but a damsel in distress who sometimes gets sexually molested.
• Kayaba comes back from the dead to help Kirito easily win the fight. He also give him the World Seed so he can make more VR games.
• Kirito tries to make Kayaba look better in comparison to Sugou, which doesn't work.
• Kirito gains two more harem members that don't really participate in the rest of the series.

3rd Arc - Phantom Bullet

• Kirito is better than Sinon even though she's played GGO more than him.
• Sinon had the potential to be a good character or even better girlfriend for Kirito, but that never happens.
• The cyberpunk world looks interesting, but it doesn't have any lore in it.
• There's a manga alt version of this for seemingly no reason (update later when it comes out in English).
• Death Gun isn't exactly an intimidating name. Bullet Reaper sounds like a better name and I came up with it in seconds.

4th Arc - Mother's Rosario

• Yuuki is created just to die. Her character is on par with Asuna, but that's just to make you feel something for her.
• The rest of the Sleeping Knight characters don't really matter and could've been taken out without repercussion.

5th Arc - Calibur (Filler Arc)

• Literally a filler arc with no real plot or character advancements. Even the novel version (Early and Late), doesn't add anything.
• Establishes Sinon as a member of the harem.

6th Arc - Alicization

• Aincrad Kirito comes back.
• Kirito almost dies in real life from a Laughing Coffin member, but doesn't.
• One of the big bosses is a completely naked lady.

Girls Ops

• All about Kirito's backup girlfriends. This would be good, but their characters aren't exactly improved or separated from one another as they only have one personality trait that separates them.

Progressive

• Retcons Kirito's solo player status in the series so far is about Asuna and Kirito's adventures.

Ordinal Scale

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Video Games

• Allows Kirito to sleep with all the girls with no repercussions.
• Kirito is one of the best players to play as from the start.
• The games are very mediocre/decent which is against what is said where the games presented are said to be enjoyable.
• Changing Kirito's character gender to female does nothing to the story in Hollow Realization.
• Kayaba comes back from the dead presumably years later to give Kirito the World Seed like he did in Fairy Dance.
• The story of the in game lore isn't expanded upon.
• It's a different story from the main series, but doesn't separate itself by too much. This in turn makes the need for a different story questionable instead of just playing the story or side events we never see.

The intro to the last Choice and Consequence story

I thought I'd give you a little taste of the last Choice and Consequence story I'll probably make. This won't be released anytime soon and I'll be publishing a Choice and Consequence collection (C&C 1 - 4 + 0) then Choice and Consequence of a Dumbass (C&C 8 + of Faith and Side Stories). I'll also have a free Halloween book out for you and probably another free Choice and Consequence Side Stories collection that focus on the paranormal and past aspects of the series. Of Faith will be included with it.

Chapter 1 – Co-op Nightmare

Beyond the hills of Hillside City is a suburban town called Hillfall Town. Unlike their city counterpart, their town is peaceful and quiet. Not many crimes or evil acts are committed here and the town thrives because of it. A small family consisting of a father, mother, and child currently live here and make a decent living. Francesco, who is the father, is a writer and computer programmer who works at home. His business sends him work to do every other day and leaves him alone for the others. For his writing job, he writes a book every two months for his decently sized audience and manages his blog and social media accounts. He cleans the house and yard when he isn’t working though he does decide when he gets his breaks.

Francesco’s wife, Melina, works as a farmhand at a farm not too far away from home. She’s incredibly useful as a worker and can even ride a bull and a horse. Their daughter, whose name is Angelica, is a one-year old baby girl. Francesco takes care of her since he’s home all the time and tries to play with her and teach her as much as he can. He does make children’s books for her though he doesn’t tell her his main stories which are a bit more gruesome and heavy on morals to say the least. The three are a happy family together among the various other happy families in Hillfall Town. There are, however, a strange occurrence happening in this peaceful town. Burned bodies have been discovered on the nearby hills. The local police haven’t been able to find the killers nor the more experience investigators from their sister city. The bodies have been identified as those belonging to people missing throughout the country. As to why they went missing and why their bodies are here, is a mystery yet to be solved.

Final thoughts on atheism

Since I've been talking about atheism for a while, I thought I'd give some final thoughts on it so I can talk about Islam (though just looking at Robert Spencer's work will do that for you) when I get time and step away from comics. There's nothing more to say on it after this summary and if anyone has to say anything, then look up what I'm talking about. It should suffice and give you plenty of information.

Atheism: The religion of dividing by zero
If there is no meaning in life and you make your own, you are dividing by zero since there is zero meaning. This also has the chain effect of making everything else that has design and purpose and makes it mean nothing.

Atheist is the one of the best examples of willful ignorance
Atheists say they don't have a religion, but do a quick Google search and you'll see that they have churches, bibles, ideologies, and main thinking points which is there is no god. Don't let the atheists who tell you they just lack belief lie to you, everyone has beliefs and no one lacks it. No one lacks in faith either since faith is just another word for trust. You have to have faith that the person talking to you isn't lying, you have to have faith that what you learn is correct, you have to have faith in yourself and many other examples that happen everyday where you have to have some level of faith. Atheism is a main part of communism, an ideology that's kill as many or more people than the Muslim faith, however, just because you're an atheist it doesn't mean you're a communist, but if you're a communist, you have to be an atheist. Atheists are also the most ignorant people as they say there is no evidence for a god, but there are tons and tons of books that prove God. I Don't Have Enough Faith to be an Atheist, Cold Case Christianity, and The Reality of God: The Layman's Guide to Scientific Evidence for the Creator just to name a few. Sure, there are other books to refute books like these but they're based on pseudoscience and lies. I also recommend Max Klobe's Atheists Always Lie series on YouTube and Inspiring Philosophy's channel as well. Don't have time for that? Check out the arguments in this list.

I've been thinking of shorter ways of proving God and the best way that's short and easy is by showing them the evidence for the resurrection of Jesus Christ.

I'd check out Inspiring Philosophy's The Resurrection of Jesus series of videos and other sources that you can easily find with a simple search.

To throw this post for a little loop, to you fellow Christians, don't misrepresent our faith and educate yourself in your faith if you want to argue about it. Don't even bother to argue if you don't have your facts straight, which goes out to everyone else who thinks they know Christianity.

Just with this you can see why atheism is completely illogical and just plain dumb, however, I'm not saying that all atheists are dumb, they're just dumb when it comes to religion and foundation to the reality we live in and the morals we live by.

Afterword
I'm going to keep this post here in case someone tries to argue with me on this topic. If they don't bother to look at the evidence presented in it then I don't bother with them.

Choice and Consequence of Faith

There’s a small town that is a good distance away from others, a town that’s recently suffered a massacre from unknown forces. Jaxon is the only man left in the town who still walks around its desolated streets without worry. It’s said that the town suffers from a mysterious condition that is unnamed as of this point in time. He’s a priest, a man of God who experiences things that could be the work of God, but it could also be the work of the devil.

The light around Jaxon is sucked away and takes him off guard. He takes out his two hidden daggers and readies himself for a fight. Several disfigured human who have their heads, arms, and legs in different places on their body come out of the darkness and attack Jaxon with their knifelike fingers. Thanks to his prior training as a knight, he dispatches them without too much trouble. He gets cut a few times, but by the time the darkness retreats, the cuts on his body and clothes disappear.

After this short encounter, he goes to his church and prays to God, which he does after every encounter.

“Please God, save our souls from this terrible nightmare. We’ve done nothing but do your bidding so we ask you this small favor so we can continue to grow our town and save more souls.”

He’s said the same prayer reworded several times to God and it doesn’t seem like He listens.

A man enters his church and says, “You should stop praying to God because He has abandoned us.”

“I’ve never lost faith in God during past hard times. He usually takes a long time to fulfill prayers or this could be a challenge to all of us.”

“Well He better free us from us from our suffering soon or the entire town will die.”

“In all due time my brother.”

The town is unable to sustain plant life, the water around them is dirty, and there are no animals to eat in the area. The only food and water they have left is running out and will probably be depleted by today. Jaxon is the one who decides to get the rest. He hands out the food and water to the people who hadn’t gotten any recently and are the most hungry. Because of this, several people turn against him  and the town then decide to leave the town on their own to try to live on. The darkness envelops them as soon as they leave the town.

The town takes out their swords, bows, and daggers and readies for another fight. More of those disfigured people come out of the darkness and attack the town. A couple people are stabbed through the head and dragged into the darkness during the fight. A few others are injured, but the battle is won.

Once the darkness leaves, the people who left are turned to skeletons and they things they had and wore are gone. This happens to most people who leave while the rest just disappear without a trace. The people of the town go to relax with few go with Jaxon to pray for help.

Once they get inside the church, Jaxon prays, “Please God forgive us for the sins we’ve committed and help us through these hard times. Be with us as we face the darkness that plagues this town and help us to kill our enemies for they torture us day and night for their evil purposes.”

As they end their prayers, the darkness comes back as it knows they’re tired and on the edge of defeat. New monsters come out of the darkness that appear to be demons. Each demon is specialized with each of the seven deadly sins. The lust demons are naked and entice people with their looks and gaze to draw them into the darkness. Sloth demons make people lazy and easy to take. Wrath demons make others kill their own and chase after the demons into the darkness. Pride demons cause people to save themselves and run away from everyone and into oblivion. The fight comes to an end when the demonic monsters back away from the remaining townspeople and the darkness is lifted once more. There are only five people left now and they all go to pray to God in one last effort to survive.

Jaxon prays with them, “Please God don’t abandon us to the flames of Hell. What have we done to deserve such agony? We praise your name day and night. We keep your commandments. We spread your name to everyone we meet and bring them to you to be saved. Do we not earn at least a little of your grace and mercy?”

The darkness overtakes the church and the demons break inside. Everyone except Jaxon is taken since he is still praying, but the demons still close in on him. He then realizes what he’s missing.

“Of course,” he says aloud, “Our salvation has already been earned because of Your sacrifice. There’s nothing we can do to earn your free gift of love and eternal life. The works we do are just to show gratitude and be Your living examples on earth. I now know this and put my life in Your hands.”

Alas, the demons cut into Jaxon’s shoulders and drag him out of the church and into the darkness, but then, a voice speaks and all of the demons turn to ash and the darkness goes away. A light envelops Jaxon and once he is able to see, he sees a kingdom not too far in the distance. A kingdom that’s miles away from the town he was in.

A man on a horse approaches Jaxon and asks him, “Why hello there son! What are you doing here?”

“I don’t know. I just got here.”

“Well that kingdom you see down there is going through some rough times. They’ve lost faith in God because of it. It probably wouldn’t be a good decision to go down there.”

Jaxon thinks to himself  about what to do. He just got out of a bad situation and now he’s here. A smile forms on his face and laughter and a feeling of peace fills his chest until he can no longer contain it once he knows what he should do.

“My brother, can you please lend me a ride to-”

The man on the horse is gone, but the horse remains with food, water, and new clothing. On his new priest garb is the letter P with the number twenty three. Jaxon wears it with honor and rides off into the city to do God’s work.

Choice and Consequence of Being a Dumbass (Unedited)

Chapter 1 – The Dumbass is Back in Town

No one likes boring exposition so let’s get into the action.

Albert gets Carl for his show by saying, “Ok Carl. You’re back in your hometown of Hillside City so you have to make them feel like this is the best place to be.”

“Don’t worry man,” Carl assures him, “You’ve trained me how to woo the crowd and I’m used to it. I got this.”

“Good luck out there and break a leg. Actually no, don’t break your legs.”

“I won’t.”

An introducer announces Carl’s presence while the crowd cheers for his return.

Carl starts out his show by saying, “It’s good to be back in one of the best cities in the world am I right?”

The crowd claps and cheers his name.

“Yup. Nowhere else in the world can I find a more peaceful, but totally crazy place thanks to our police force. There they are, let’s give them a round of applause!”

Harley, the chief of police, along with her three favorite officers and her friend and her husband are here for Carl’s return and thanks everyone for their appreciation.

“So staying on you chief, is it true that you and your officers actually had their hair colored white at some point in their youth?”

“Yes!” Harley says with a little laugh.

“What an odd hair color choice. Tell me, did you choose that color because of your heavenly personalities or because you are all dead inside and that’s how you guys can execute so many criminals?”

This line gets a good laugh out of the crowd and the police officers.

“So what else do people think about Hillside City besides our police force? Oh yeah. The Human Mirror or whatever the psychologists call this condition in Latin. They think that just because a lot of people in this city get this condition, means it’s a bad place to live and they couldn’t be farther from the truth if they tried.”

The crowd cheers in agreement.

“What is the Human Mirror anyways? Some sort of Silent Hill rip-off state of mind where your personality comes to life and tries to help you change your life by showing you the monster in the mirror. If I ever get that condition, I hope I can get the UFO ending so I can hang out with James Sunderland, Harry Mason, and some rad grey aliens. Does anyone have a blue stone by any chance?”

There’s a bit of laughter by the crowd. Carl then goes into bits about real world events, politics, and other funny point about life that always get the crowd laughing their guts out. He comes to the end of the show and starts it out in a special way for his own city.

“Now here’s the part that you love and I hate. Back when I was a kid, I was the unpopular boy in the class with no real friends, I don’t even think the teachers liked me. There was no real reason for this, I think, so it just must’ve been my ugly face that got them to dislike me. So one day I got the bright idea to do a little performance to gain their approval. I wore the coolest clothes I could find and tried talking to who I thought were the most popular kids in class. The problem? I accidentally slipped on something and headbutted one of the kids in the face. I didn’t get detention for it since it was obviously an accident, but that excuse got me the nickname, ‘The Accident’, which is funny because that’s also what my parents say.”

Carl laughs along with the crowd.

“Well what can you say? I’m just a big dumbass, thank you everyone for coming here tonight!”

The crowd claps and cheers for their comedian.

“That was a great job Carl,” Albert says.

“What do you expect from an expert comedian whose gotten laughs around the country?”

“I know, but don’t get too comfortable, you still have a few more days of hometown work.”

“It’s what I live for man so it’s all good. Now I’m gonna get a few drinks from the bar. Want to join?”

“Sure.”

“But you actually have to drink more than a couple beers ya lightweight.”

“I won’t make any promises.”

After having a few drinks with his manager, Carl goes back home and settles back into his nice upper-class apartment. He looks over the city while enjoying a glass of Italian red wine and takes in the feeling of being back home and all the memories that come with it. A hot shower and a few midnight shows get him to fall asleep, but he’s woken up by an other him with monsters behind him. Monsters who appear to be hurting themselves with sharp appendages and choking themselves. Several of them look like live execution machines while others are humanlike things that appear to be in pain from something inside them. Carl goes back to sleep and everything but the other him disappears.

The other him says, “What did you do that for?”

“I’m tired. I need to sleep.”

“Makes sense.”

The other him falls asleep along with Carl.

Chapter 2 – Coping with Comedy

During the day before each show, Carl doesn’t do much besides enjoy the rewards of his labor. Though this is where he was born, he’s very distant from his family and the only friends he has are the ones behind the show, but they don’t always have time to hang out with each other. Long story short, Carl is alone all day with the things he’s earned onto the next show! Albert doesn’t really give Carl any tips on what to say and just gives him control of the show today.

As the crowd settles down after he takes the stage, Carl begins tonight by saying, “Because my manager is lazy enough to allow me to take charge of this chapter of my show series, I’ll talk about books. Ah boring old novels. Who seriously reads hundreds of pages of a story when it’s easier to have the story shown to you via movie or TV show? Or how about more fun as in video games? What about going half way and reading a comic book? Who seriously reads porn instead of watching it am I right?”

A good laugh comes out of the audience.

“But to give books their credit, they are effect at putting me to sleep.”

The crowd laughs with him a bit.

“But seriously, there are very few books that I would actually consider reading like a cook book or Shit to Say to Keep People Entertained.”

Another nice laugh is gotten out of this.

“Speaking about books, I tried to get a couple books published a fiction and another book about comedy and coping with being single. I sent them to a publisher a friend recommended to me and you can already guess what happened. None of it passed. The reason? The editing and the audience I was targeting was all wrong apparently even though my friend said my work was perfect for it. I went to a local bookstore to see what kind of books they sell and man the words they used in it were so flowery. You’d think they sell poems and English books instead of fiction and nonfiction. This is probably the reason a lot of people don’t read novels and instead go with literally anything else I know it’s the reason with me. All I care about in a novel is the story and as long as the storytelling is clear and the story itself is interesting then I’ll consider it great. Let’s see if we can make better stories than those ‘professional writers’ here and now ok?”

The crowd cheers as they raise their hands so they can come up on stage and tell their story. Some of the stories told are fan fiction type stories, others are mostly original, and some people just told personal real-life stories. After this bit of interaction, he begins to end the show.

“Since you’ve told some of your personal stories, I might as well tell my own. Being a small little shit teenager, I got into trouble, but it was never truly my fault. I always got setup by someone else or my parents thought an accident I made was on purpose. As such, I barely got that many gifts and allowance money. On one day when I did have enough money to buy something for myself, I went to a comic store and was going to get a couple books, but the thing is, I gave a few dollars to a homeless boy on the street and only got two comics. Good old Carl, right? Well the thing is, is that later the boy was on the news later that night for fatally injuring one man and injuring a couple other people because he was on drugs. So that’s what my charity did, but what do you expect from me? I’m just a big dumbass! Thank you everyone for coming tonight!”

The crowd cheers as Carl leaves the stage. Again, he asks Albert to go to the bar for a few drinks, but this time he declines. Looking for a drinking partner, Carl asks one of the other people he knows and the two drink together for a couple short hours before going their separate ways. Back at home he takes another drink before going to sleep. Again, his monsters come to haunt him.

This time he says to them, “Fuck off.”

And the monsters ‘fuck off’ by jumping out of the apartment window.

The other him lays next to Carl and asks, “You’re such a dumbass for not doing something about your problem.”

“That’s what makes me one. Now do you have any smart words to say to me or are you just going to keep me awake?”

“Eh, none of the above.”

“Good. Sleep time.”

Carl and the other him go to sleep and hold their issues for the next day like every other day.

Chapter 3 – Three More Drinks, Three More Poisons

There are few things Carl doesn’t have. He has tons of comics, games, movies, TV shows, fancy drinks and even a few pornographic PC games, but he doesn’t have boats, expensive cars, or luxurious furniture. These things were never on Carl’s shopping list as he never wanted them though he does feel the need to spend money on something. He instead spends whatever excess money he makes on charities since he charities will always need money. His bills never bother him so they’re never on his mind even when he stays at expensive hotels. He pretty much has everything he could ever want except for a few things. A few things that could help him keep going besides his show. Speaking of that, because of Carl great made up performance last night, Albert gets the idea for Carl to talk about art. He quickly refreshes Carl knowledge on the topic and sends him out to his raving fans.

“Thanks to my amazing manager, we’re going to talk about art. Yeah, I know art can be subjective, but I mean really, who the hell would buy some of the stuff they show nowadays. We have a few pieces of ‘art’ to show you today.”

A few paintings and drawings appear above Carl’s head a big TV.

“Ok here we go…this one looks like some kind of animal. This one looks like a person who just came out of a car accident. This right here looks like a bunch of shapes mixed together. This here straight up looks like someone messed it up and kept messing it up. Now this one looks like a dick, there’s no subtly in that, I’m not the only one seeing that right?”

The crowd laughs while he gave his interpretations and in agreement.

“And the real funny thing about this abstract art is that people make hundreds of thousands of dollars per drawing. Damn man, I could totally draw drunk while using my ass as my tool and sell whatever abomination is made for the price of a nice car.”

This gets a good laugh out of the crowd.

“But even though it isn’t taken seriously nowadays, there can be cool art pieces to look at. Not for large amounts of money in my opinion, but still. There are also ‘artists’ who insert their art into their work and it doesn’t really work. There’s this one rare book author that I read from and this guy has his own style where he puts a picture that pertains to the chapter or story in the beginning of the chapter. To be honest, the drawings are fine for the genre the story is in, but they suck.”

Carl and the crowd laugh a bit.

“This guy really needs to work on his art style or else people are going to think he’s overrated or just not worth their time. I mean I think you guys can drawing better than this self-published author so who wants to prove that?”

Carl brings up several people and they paint several pictures with the tools presented. The participants are rewarded in cash and with praise from the audience.

“Believe it or not, this is one of the only ways I can get people to like me. I’ve tried to hold or get into relationships with a girl for years. Some already have boyfriends, some have higher standards, but there was one who accepted me. I was a young man trying to find my purpose in life and I met this girl at a bar whose number I got somehow. We really got to know each other and we were basically perfect for each other. Sure I had to buy things for her despite my limited wallet and she barely bought things for me, but that didn’t matter since I kept her happy. After about a year of dating, I get this text message from this one guy we both know tells me she broke up with me and that he’s sorry. Strange I know, but what’s stranger is that the both of them disappear from the planet I mean I couldn’t get in touch with either of them over the phone and no one was home at her house. So what I think essentially happened was that she was cheating on me the entire time without me knowing then decided to finally hook up with the guy and leave town to avoid any drama.”

The crowd laughs at the story.

“It’s true I swear! Fucking hundreds of dollars and wasted time and emotions out the window for no good reason. But what do I know, right? I could’ve been doing something wrong without knowing. I mean I am a big dumbass after all! Thank you everyone for coming tonight!”

Again, Carl asks for a drinking partner after the show, but no one wants to drink with him. He goes home and has a drink by himself. This time, his monsters appear to him while he drinks.

Pouring several drinks, he says, “You guys want a drink?”

The monsters and the other him take the offer and have a little drinking party together. All of the monsters’ skin slowly fall apart as the party goes on until their bodies fall apart and Carl passes out.

Chapter 4 – Another Day Another Step Forward to the Edge

Since Carl doesn’t have anything to do in the morning, he rests until he has to go to his show. This isn’t the first time he’s done this and he doesn’t mind. It isn’t like there’s someone that cares what he’s doing or how he is. Once it’s time to go out on stage, Albert gives Carl a few pointers as to what to say today and he goes along with it.

“Today, I’m going to talk to you about how to become famous. Now let’s start at the bottom which is where we all start unless we got connections in the industry we’re going for. What you want to do is constantly work towards your goal while enjoying what you’re doing. Don’t overwork yourself, but also don’t become lazy. You see that author I told you about last night hopes for people to get his books and talk about them while he tries to use social media and blogging to get people interested in him. He’s a self-published author so he has to get all of his readers on his own and to be honest, he’s not really good at it. Sure, he entertains his audience and give us what we want, but it’s going to take a while before he gets any kind of fame and fortune if it’s even a possibility for him. What did I do to get here? Constant practice and I just happened to run into the right people. Lucky for you guys and gals today, I’m going to help some of you get your names out there.”

Carl brings up many people to get their name out there in the field they wish. He clarifies what they want to do in life, why, then endorses those who are confident and helps others who don’t have much confidence. Several familiar stories and feelings come through to Carl, which almost bring him to tears. These people are given the most endorsement due to sympathy and relatability. Carl makes tonight show more about the audience and less about comedy, a quirk that gives him a lot of his appeal. Alas, he still ends the show the way he always does.

“Wow you people are something special, but then again, I shouldn’t be surprised by one of the best cities not only in this country but in the world.”

The crowd roars in agreement.

“You people are so special in fact that I’m actually jealous. No seriously, I’m jealous! The levels of strength, determination, and patience is something else that I have never seen or have been able to do. I know that’s really saying something when you know my past, but I’ve only been able to just get by with low amounts of confidence and patience. Let’s hear it again for you.”

Carl claps and gives praise for his audience and they cheer his name and clap for him in return as a show of appreciation.

“Thank you, thank you. I swear you like me more than anyone I’ve ever known besides my wonderful crew in the back who help me. Let’s hear it for them as well.”

The crowd and Carl clap for his crew.

“You know it’s funny that I’ve let you run the show today even though I’m supposed to be the entertainment. This is a comedy show that I’m supposed to have full control over, but what do I know, I’m just a big dumbass. Thank you everyone for coming and participating tonight!”

Tonight is again another drinking night especially with the big crowd and everyone praising it on social media. The whole crew drinks with him and enjoy a great night out together with Carl drinking the most. Because of this, he passes out as soon as he gets home. His monsters, unable to move because of his state, lay down with him.

Chapter 5 – Let the Ocean Take Me

As Carl lays down his bed, his other him calls Albert to say that he’s taking the night off.

“Really man? This is your big comeback! Did you really drink that much last night?” Albert asks.

“Yeah, I’m sorry man,” says the other him, “You know my bad habits.”

“Your bad habits are going to get you killed.”

“This isn’t the first time we’ve tried.”

The other him hangs up the phone as Carl bolts out of bed.

“What did you so that for?”

“What’s the point of doing this day after day? Huh? We keep making money and getting things for no real purpose. We have everything that we could ever want except what we really want. A family. A wife. A kid. We are famous, but we still can’t get what millions of other people can.”

“So what the fuck do you want me to do about it?!”

“There’s nothing we can do! All we can do is just keep suffering like this until we eventually die!”

“Then why don’t we skip to the best part?!”

“Why don’t we.”

Carl opens his window then jumps out. Before he hits the ground, the ground disappears and brings him to the past where his family is yelling at him for his mistakes. He hears a crowd laughing at him in the background as this is happening.

“No! I’m not going through this shit again!”

He breaks his own neck and gets turned around to see his ex-girlfriend and her new boyfriend laughing about Carl and joking about how much of an idiot Carl is. The laughing crowd grows louder.

“Stop it!”

Carl pulls a pistol out of nowhere and shoots himself in the head, but he just falls down and into the streets of the city where people are making fun of him while some yell at him for not being funny. The laughing from the crowd grows even louder and crazier to the point where Carl’s ears start to bleed. He screams and run out into traffic and gets hit, but he doesn’t die and just gets slammed into his monsters.

“Just do your purpose and fucking kill me!”

The monsters gladly start beating and slashing at Carl much to his relief. Suddenly, they stop beating him and he blacks out.

Chapter 6 – An Unkillable Desire

Moments later, Carl wakes up in a hospital bed.

The doctor there tells him that, “We found you at the bottom at flight of stairs. Be careful next time you drink alright? You’re lucky.”

Carl thinks to himself that his stupid brain’s biggest plan to kill him was by just throwing himself down the stairs.

“It seems you got quite a number of visitors Carl,” the nurse says as tons and tons of people come to him.

They tell him stories of how he’s their inspiration, their role model, and their source of laughter to help them continue living. All of their words give him a feeling of importance. A feeling that he’s always wanted and a feeling that he got in a way he never thought he get in this way. After he heals a bit, he decides to hold the comeback show for tonight.

Albert gets Carl for his show by saying, “Ok Carl. You’re back in business in your hometown of Hillside City so you have to make them feel like this is the best place to be.”

“Don’t worry man,” Carl assures him, “You’ve trained me how to woo the crowd and I’m used to it. I got this.”

“Good luck out there and break a leg. Actually no, don’t break your legs again.”

“I won’t.”

An introducer announces Carl’s presence while the crowd cheers for his return.

Carl starts out his show by saying, “It’s good to be back and active in one of the best cities in the world am I right? You see, I learned something really important after my ‘accident’ not only am I a big dumbass for my past actions and mistakes, I’m a dumbass for not seeing my purpose in life and the people around me that depend on me. It doesn’t matter that I hang out with them every day, it doesn’t matter if they’re not in a relationship with me, it doesn’t matter if they return the love back, and it doesn’t matter if they’re my kids. What’s important is that they continue living with hope and have a role model that shows them not to give up even when things are beyond difficult. I can promise you no, I promise you that I will always be that person you look up to even when I make mistakes. I am a big dumbass hero to people after all.”

THE END

Improving Hawkeye Kate Bishop

Yet another feminist girl power type character with not much to her so it's not too hard to adhere to her character while making another one. If there's anything I'm missing that I could add, please let me know so we can show Marvel how to really make good strong characters.

Origin
Kate Bishop's rich family hit hard times and in their panic, they sell their daughter to the mercenary group they use for their political purposes. These mercenaries used Kate as human bait (human shield, jail bait, or a distraction), but they also taught her the basics of fighting. Because of her usefulness and loyalty, they give her more things to do and reward her more. She eventually becomes a member and a friend to the group. Once she's able to make decisions, she decides to go after her parents and uses their information on them to put them in jail and later executed for their actions. Hawkeye and several Shield agents eventually took the mercenary group down, but instead of getting captured, most of the members of the group committed suicide. Kate was one of the only people they could save. Because of her experience and OG Hawkeye's own life of changing from villain to hero, he takes in Kate as an apprentice and trains her to be a hero. Their time together eventually gets Kate to change after seeing the harm she does because of her previous lifestyle and she becomes a great member of Shield.

Legacy
The only situation she would take over the mantle of Hawkeye would be if the original would die or during a Civil War event where she disagreed with the way things were being done.

Improving Mockingbird (Ask Me About My Anti-Sexist Agenda)

The infamous Ask me about my Feminist agenda girl is here and she's up for some improvements. Since I've only read her one comic volume and don't know much else about her, I'm going to have to make stuff up to give her more character and personality that's still like the one we see today.

Origin

Barbara "Bobbi" Morse has always tried to prove herself to be one of top people. Whether it'd be in grades, athletics, or real world topics, she wanted to be the best person to talk to or at least one of them. In a super hero world, one of best normal human Shield agents is nothing compared to Captain America, the Hulk, or Spider-man so she follows in Cap's footsteps and invents a formula to give herself enhanced strength and endurance. This special trait of hers is only special for so long as Shield forces her to hand out the formula to the rest of the agents. Iron man encourage her to become a better agent through her works since the only thing that makes him a special hero is his suit and mind. After facing a villain or two that disables the powers of the rest of the heroes, Mockingbird learns the importance of personal skill, intelligence, and the works of lower ranking individuals and lets go of her pride while teaching others the lessons she's learned.

This Mockingbird becomes less selfish and is less sexist than her comic counterpart. Her story also teaches the importance of every individual in the world playing their part in the world so it can be a better place.

Improving Silk

Yeah I know I recommend the comic series, but there can always be improvements the obvious being the art. The art should make Silk look cute or seductive since her hero name Silk implies this. This should also go with her personality but we'll get to that later.

Origin, Powers, and Goal
After being bitten by a similar spider that bit Peter Parker, Cindy Moon got powers similar to him. She obtain a weaker but competent spider sense, increased strength and endurance, being able to spin clothes, spin from webs, and fingers are like claws. Cindy is put in a bunker like shelter by her parents like the comics, but when Spider-man goes to rescue her, she's already escaped by constantly digging through the wall every day Shawshanke Redemption style. He catches up with her and tells her that she's no longer captive here and that's she's free to live her life. She decides to live like a superhero after she gets trained by Spider-man and Spider-woman.
Starting her new life, she fights crime while working for J Jonah Jameson and looking for information on her family. Along the way she makes befriends a couple who remind her what familial love and normal life feels like (they act as a grounding and relaxation part of her story). The dragon person who she first faces in vol 0 becomes a friend as well and shows that not all villains are completely evil and are worth a second chance. Cindy's activities attract the attention of Shield and Black Cat, which allow her to use both sides to her advantage in finding her family. She has to balance being a hero and villain at the same time while staying morally good. Her personality would be fun loving with a side of seduction as the name Silk implies and gives her character a well rounded feel to it.

This, in my opinion, is a better Silk story than the one we already have though I still recommend reading the one that's out right now.

Update and Free Will Experiment

Hello! If you didn't notice, I put Elephanty from C&C 1 as my background for my blog so it's not so bright and easier on the eyes.

After I get the review for my latest book, I'll put them on the back of my next book pictured above, which is a collection of the first five Choice and Consequence stories not including Saving Lives and Redemption. These two other stories will be included in the next collection which will have the last couple of Choice and Consequence stories plus the spin-offs. I'll be writing the 8th Choice and Consequence story in the meantime that parodies and criticizes things in my books for fun. I also changed my politics section to just recommending certain YouTubers who have the right information on current events.

Now you must be wondering about the Free Will Experiment I have cooked up. This is for those who don't believe that there's free will. The experiment goes like this.
Grab a knife and use the blunt/not sharp edge of it and slowly cut your own throat or the throat of someone close by to you, but they should not know why you are doing this.

Outcome 1 - You don't do it and prove that you can choose.
Outcome 2 - You pretend cut your or the other person's throat (somehow without them stopping you and asking you questions) and show how gullible you are and easy to manipulate.
Outcome 3 - You for some reason cut yourself with the sharp edge of the knife and show that you don't know how to use your free will.

Tell me what you think if you think this is interesting. I came up with it not too long ago and it might not be perfect but it sounds good at least in theory.

Improving Ms. Marvel (Kamala Khan)

 This character was created solely to push Islam as a religion of peace even though it isn't. I haven't read these yet and I will review the second book later, but check out these books by Robert Spencer, who is an expert on Islam; The Truth about Muhammad and The Complete Infidel's guide to the Koran. All of these contain truths about Islam and the hateful ideology that it actually is. With that out of the way, we'll obviously take the Muslim part of this character as a defining trait or at least start her out as religiously neutral. We'll take both of these premises to try to make an interesting character that most people can like.

Religious origin 1 - Muslim Family
Kamala is a girl caught between Western values and Islamic ones. Her family pushes their faith onto her for "her own good", but because of the things she hears happening in the Middle East, she researches deeper into her faith, filters through the misinformation and facts and finds that her faith is rooted in a pedophile and warlord. Once she gets her powers, she goes over to the Islamic states and see's that she's correct as she witnesses the oppression and killing of non-Muslims such as Christians who are always under attack. She shows her family this and they either lose their faith or become one of her villains she has to face. From here, her faith switches to; Christian, Jew, or just spiritually neutral and later learns how to bridge gaps between the faiths while filtering out the bad ones.

Religious origin 2 - Neutral
Being brought up in a world where religion is being confused, misrepresented, and thought to be the source of violence and logical stagnation, Kamala get interested in faith. She does her own research, but she's still somewhat confused so when she gets her powers, so once she gets her power, she observes the actions of the people of every faith to see which is correct. She'll even get to talk to heroes who have faith like Captain America, Daredevil, and Ghost Rider and other heroes who have lost faith, but still have some sort of it like the Punisher. After doing all this, she does the same thing as the previous state in the end.

How she got her powers is the same and one of the reasons why she looks for a faith to believe in since the reason she got her powers is unexplained and is like a miracle to her. Her fan girl personality can stay the same and so can her outfit, however, she thinks about morality differently. Morality to her is objective since it has to be grounded in a solid foundation so that it can never change and because morals are discovered not made up. This would also be a reason for her to believe in a God.

As far as her heroics go, she tries to team up with her favorite heroes in at least her first arc while imitating them with her disguise power. This gets her into trouble with each heroes biggest villain(s) and she gets beaten every time. She later learns the value of being your own person and fighting her own unique villains to help in places that her favorite heroes cannot help in. This would be at least a little more than half of the series' content despite the religious themes that re integral to her character.

The reason she is a faith based character is to talk about real world religions (as was the original intention) while also delivering a fun and thoughtful comic book experience. Her series could do both and become a great comic book series because of it.

Review of Silk comics + Hawkeye Kate Bishop

4/5 for the entire series

Yeah, I didn't expect to like it this much either. The Silk series is about Silk aka Cindy Moon is another Spider-woman who has her own difficulties like being a unique hero, dealing with her job, and finding her family. Her unique spider powers are a less accurate spider sense, being able to spin clothes and webs from her fingertips, claws, being able to swing from webs, enhanced strength, and durability. Not exactly an exciting arsenal but she makes the most of it. As far as personality goes, I like how she plays both good and bad guy in vo1 1 and how she balances her normal life and her external goals. She really puts in the work to do what she wants and doesn't just win because she's the main character. Her two lesbian interracial friends are sort of just there to fill the SJW Marvel quota and Silk saying sexist at least once. Both friends don't really have any other personality other than "nice lesbian" and don't do anything plot-relevant other than cheerleader friends. They could've just been one boy and one girl or even gay guys and nothing would've changed. Cindy's family and ex/not so ex-boyfriend are pretty much the same except the ex-boyfriend at least gets ghost powers later like Gwenpool's friend. I do wish they gave Silk's dragon friend (whatever his name was) from vol 0 more showtime since he was like Silk in vol 1 where he had to do bad sometimes to support his daughter and because he was a single father. It is cool that they give J Jonah Jameson a nice personality when it comes to dealing with Silk instead of making him act the way he does with Peter Parker. They even show him dealing with his own struggle in the clone mini-arc when he gets his wife and daughter back.

The arcs that happen in this series don't really stand out except for vol 1, but they work in introducing Silk to the Marvel universe and showing off her skills and personality against decent challenges that are interesting enough. Below are the art styles in Silk.

*art styles in vol 0*

*art style changes to Tana Ford in the last issue in vol 0 and stays this way until vol 3*

*art style changes to Irene Strychalski in vol 3 who goes for a Gwenpool style*

*art style goes back to Tana Ford who goes back and forth in being mediocre to good in the last two issues*

In my opinion, the second switch in art style presented in a single issue in vol 0 is the best art style while Tana Ford's style is mediocre or decent enough, but at least she gets better in the end.
All in all, this is a good series that you should check out if you like fun comic stories and are looking for actually good comics in Marvel besides Gwenpool, Ghost Rider, Venom, or a few others that I previously mentioned in earlier posts.

Extra - Hawkeye Kate Bishop vol 1 - 2.5/5

Now we get to the less interesting book. This book has the same lesbian couple from Silk LITERALLY the same white girl and black girl and girl power. There might've been mentions of sexism, but I could've forgotten it or missed it when I was reading through the book faster because I got bored after the first couple issues. Oh yeah, and what's this with Kate Bishop being the best Hawkeye? It says it on the back of the book and Gwenpool says it in her vol 3. Kate Bishop was apparently in Hawkeye's comics, but I don't get how she could be cooler when his first comic vol is called My Life as a Weapon and her first comic is called Anchor Points. The OG Hawkeye was a villain first then became a hero which is more interesting than Kate who became a hero because she wanted to be a hero (at least to my knowledge). Don't pick this up unless you want to try SJW comics, but I recommend Silk instead or the other comics I've mentioned.

New Book Out!

Choice and Consequence: Present and Past Nightmares is out as an eBook on Amazon for $0.99. The physical version will be out later for $5.99. Both editions contain edits and extras that should make it worth it! Check out the unedited version here on this blog if you wish to get a taste of the stories before you buy it.
I'm also putting together a collection of Choice and Consequence stories called Choice and Consequence: The Original Thrillers, which are the first five stories in this series that were originally imagined as video games. This collection contains all of the extras for each book except for the extra story that is included with Romance, Mistera, and the Short paper on the Human Mirror. You can see both of those on this blog for free.

Improving Miles Morales

Miles Morales, in my opinion, isn't that interesting of a character or a spider-man. To fix this, all we have to do is change his origin story and the rest will follow. Here's my idea of a revamped origin story.
Miles Morales is teenage criminal whose been put in jail multiple times by spider-man. He has a burning hatred for the hero since doing crimes is how Miles supports his poor family and himself. On one day that spider-man is facing multiple villains (could be the sinister six), Miles sees an opportunity to take revenge on him. As spider-man is dodging and evading so many attacks, Miles takes his gun at and gets that one lucky shot that spider-man doesn't see coming. Miles goes over to spider-man and gloats about his revenge and talks about how spider-man is a hypocrite for claiming to help others while severally damaging Miles' family. Spider-man then tells Miles that he's happy to finally help his family and dies. The villains congratulate Miles and reward him handsomely for his services. After using his rewards to get his family and him a nice house and gifts, they are robbed and his family is killed while he is out. Miles' actions has thrown the city of New York into chaos since its most famous defender is dead and now he sees why spider-man was so dedicated to stopping crime. Because of this, he decides it's his responsibility to fix things so he gets himself bitten by a radioactive spider and becomes spider-man.
He can have the same powers he does in the normal comics, but the struggles he goes through are different. Miles has to struggle with; coping with the loss of his family, getting to know other people, being responsible for the crimes he's committed, seeing the good in him as he tries to fix things, and trying not to kill.
This would make him the best spider-man since not only did he kill the original, but he also has the most to make up for, the most to learn (which can lead to a lot of moral lessons), and the greatest responsibility. In my opinion, this is a better and more interesting Miles Morales. I call this spider-man, Venom Stinger Spider-Man or Venom Spider in reference to one of his abilities (name could probably use work). Tell me what you think if you have any opinions about this and if you think this is interesting.